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Extimum reincarnates in the world of HP AU with knowledge of his past life except his identity, luckily he also gets a gift with his reincarnation, extimum must learn to control his gift, discover the mysteries of his current identity and live his life in this fantastic and dangerous world of magic
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This version is translated by google translator, so I am not sure of the quality, I upload it mainly for those of the app that do not have a translator
I will edit the chapters slowly to be more readable, you can identify them with the symbol they have before the name.
If you want to read the original version (Spanish), you can enter my profile or follow this link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter-el-zorro-celestial_21135401405306205
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the original image on the cover is not mine, just modify it, if the owner wants me to remove it, he can tell me.
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This is the first story / fanfic that I write so I will upload some test chapters if you like it, constructive criticism is accepted
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ahahahaha harem in harry potter ahahahah, get the f out ............................................................................................................
if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story... because anything related to the golden trio, the mc automatically becomes air. it's almost a copy of history... no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info) in general, I wouldn't recommend it... but you're there to read and pass the time
I enjoy what you have done in the book so far. Hope you continue writing because you are doing great 👍 .
love the story please continue on with what youre doing and ignore all the hate also i hope you update more frequently looking at the long gaps in updates makes it a little discouraging to read
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if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info)
The translation is quite bad, stability of updates is also meh, character is quite lame and the story/world isnt anything special... too bad
well first of all, I've only read up until the four of them finished fighting the troll. the writing is a mess. it's either your english is bad or the way you translate it from your mother language is wrong. also, your pharagraps is too long to read comfortably, especially so for mobile users. you should've shortened it to 20-50 words. I could easily see many pharagraps having more than 50 words. the story is meh. no innovation from the canon, pretty much just MC being a side character in the overall story. the idea for the MC is not bad. though the author haven't explain properly how the MC gained his powers. don't know if the author will explain it in the future chapter. don't care, i won't continue reading it anyway.
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Good. I very much like this fan novel, i can't wait for more ch.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
If it wasn’t for the mc it would be a pretty good book, but the mc seems to get quite a few deus ex michinas and yet still manages to be a wallflower.
Hello author is this novel dropped or not?, also I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel.
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Very good story and world building loving it so far you prob know this but with the grammar only problem I can see that effect it is for quite a lot of the book she and he r mixed up
This is one of, if not the, best HP FF's on this site. It's absolutely amazing, the story mostly follows canon events but puts it's own spin on them, MC i cold and calculating in the beginning but develops well with the story. His bloodline isn't just an OP power up, it takes time to develop and even then it's not just an upgrade. There are some grammatical things to fix such as Spanish pronouns, refering to objects as she and so on, which I personally think only adds to the story but that's me. Would love to read more when author has time again!
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