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*ZZZr Zzrz Zzrzzr* However, an additional source disturbed his sleep, filling the room with a buzzing sound. The boy furrowed his brows in annoyance, his eyes still closed. He searched his surroundings and discovered a glass-like slab. With closed eyes, he slid his finger across it and placed it near his ear.
"Hello..." he mumbled in his drowsy voice, which carried a hint of depth.
"Hey, Pissed-up Prat, where are you?" a voice laced with disdain emanated from the slab.
The boy, referred to as the "Pissed-up Prat" by the irritating female voice, recognized it as a voice he heard frequently but couldn't recall its owner. With his eyes still closed, he inquired, "Who is this?"
"What do you mean, 'who is this'? Wake up, come home, or eat shit for breakfast if you prefer!" the voice behind the transparent slab retorted before falling silent.
The boy, still not fully awakened, gazed at the half-opened glass slab with a mixture of confusion and surprise. As his eyes darted around the room, he became increasingly shocked.
As he recollected the fragmented memories from the night before he lost consciousness, his gaze fell upon the entrance of the shop. Once old and damp, it now bore a different appearance. While not transformed into a luxurious space, it had undergone improvements compared to its previously dilapidated state.
The shop took on a rectangular shape, with one longer side adorned with wooden shelves intricately patterned. Rows of empty glass jars lined these shelves. On the opposite side, there was another wooden shelf, also displaying empty jars. Towards the beginning of the counter, where the boy had been sleeping, there stood a peculiar machine.
Confusion etched across his face, he murmured to himself, "Whose shop is this?"
In response to his question, a mechanical voice resonated in his mind.
[The Omnistore belongs to you, host.]
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Hey author, I really enjoy your story. Aside from the few times you mix character names up it’s great. I do have one issue though. That being that you always make it a point to say that your character isn’t going to kiss a girl after she gives him head. Not only does it ruin any sort of immersion, it is also super sexist and hypocritical. It’s just kinda distasteful to read every single time considering he doesn’t seem to think he shouldn’t kiss them after going down on them.
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Nostalgia, is that song in synopsis from that movie where the alien jadu seen...did you just remake that song in English
Thanks to this book i managed to clean my room ahead of time and get a nap after a long while. For a gigolo the MC is immature, doing SA here and there and get angry when things don't go his way. The system? aside from status and few treasure hunt it's just plain useless.
This story is a great read but we could use more visuals or images for the characters besides that the updates are both good and constent.
Shameful author here:- I wrote it so obviously I am gonna give it five stars and hope you will too, also if you find any mistakes or have some doubt do comment them in chapters or paragraph comments I read them all. Even if you don't find any mistakes or don't have some doubts make sure to give feedback I need to know what readers are likes and do not like in my work. Thanks for reading my novel.