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(PS: THE MC IS OP FROM THE START)
I was reincarnated into Lookism by my own selfish desire.
Desperate trying to change its ending, I looked for simulator games that were about Lookism and I found one.
One that I could pick the time and place where I would first start and where I can pick my strength.
So with me designing my character and putting all his ability’s to the max while adding the ability that I perfect every combat and defensive style….
I didn’t realize I was designing the new me.
But did I go overboard?
Nahhhhhhhhhh
Disclaimer: The age between first generation and 2nd generation is about 1-7 years wide. Meaning THAT when James lee took down the first generation kings he was 17-19 meanwhile Goo and gun was 15 or 14 as well as Daniel maybe 11-13
THE TIME AND YEARS ARE NEVER DISCLOSED SO DONT EXPECT EXACT DETAILS BUT I WILL TRY MY BEST.
Like I said. This book that im writing is nowhere near good as I’m a newbie at writing
DISCLAIMER: THE TIMELINE FOR LOOKISM IS REALLY NOT EXPLAINED and im only gonna add 3 manhawas.
LOOKISM, MANAGER KIM, (lil bit)QUESTIUSM, and viral hit.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN LOOKISM OR ANY PTJ UNIVERSE. RESPECT TO THE AUTHOR WHO WROTE A GREAT STROY EVEN THOUGHT ITS COMPLICATED
PPS:PS:I’m not an award experience writer, I AM a noob, novice, beginner, green horn at writing but I will try my best for grammar. Like I said, not experienced writer. I AM writing as I go by.
ALL PICTURES DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT TO THEIR RESPECTIVE ILLUSTRATORS
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Yes, the Mc is overpowered from the start. He’s never weak or we will never see him weak. Sorry to you people who love seeing a weak Mc at the start
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Writing Quality- It’s great and there’s nearly no grammatical mistakes, so far I only found 2. Update Stability- Well the story just started so hopefully it has good stability. Story Development- The story is developing greatly. He is giving out info. But not in as big info. Dumps and the chapters are quite long. Character Desgin- I would say that he has created the main character in a great way. World Background- Well it’s a fanfic…
There story didn't really flow. When I first read this, I was confused and found it hard to follow along with the plot.
i really like it its masterpiece i like that mc is overpowered like hes LEGEND however mc sister would be good if she would fall in love with daniel park in his second body and you are gonna train him bc you saw his potential however mc already know his potential of course however make him stronger
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why did u drop its one of my fav lookism fanfic their not many fan fic about lookism
it my fav lookism also have chapter not like other lookism fan only has chap 10 but are u dropig ? u didint upload anything new plz dont drop
Vas a seguir escribiendo la historia? O ya la abandonaste? Es muy buena historia, así que espero que no la abandones. Cielos, me pregunto cómo será el encuentro con Kim soohyun
.................................................... update it brother ................................ ....................................................
A good story idea and character design + writing is good but the author is really inconsistent with the chapters and is most likely to drop the fic. So its not worth wasting your time to read this just to end up in a itching suspense or cliff hanger
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love the op mc and the character references are really appealing to me so those are all a plus. writing quality is fine a few mistakes and a little confusing but not to the point that you don't get what is going on with the plot, just half way through the story so far and just wanted to make a review highly recommend if you are a fan of all the lookism universe big thumbs up
.................................................................................................................. Wish it would be updated more ..................................................................................................................
My favourite Lookism fanfic everything is perfect and author add my fav genre(OVERPOWERED MC)