Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon

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Garland

Despite the spelling and grammar probprms, my main ossue comes feom just how rush, unorganised and just overall messy the story and writing. I can see a good story but man, sometimes things aren't explained, everything is just rushed and overall it feels like completely random at times. Thsir is no clear direction to the story and it feels like sometimes moat of what i am reading is a summary.

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PlintShowBOB

i liked it, simple as that, keep the good work bro. is it a translation ? if it is can you tell me the name ? .........................................

LV 10

NoNameDao

I've just realized after reading 118 chapters that I freaking hate this fanfic. why you gotta make so much of a beta 😕

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towerofdevil53

i like the story how is, ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Fatih_Karadeniz

It's a very good story, it has the potential to be the best danmachi story the writer always keeps it up and if you write good stories like this and other fanfics it would be great

LV 10

joey_thomas

Writing quality one star it's really bad not unreadable but really bad. update stability five stars I think we get a chapter every day. story development I think its a really good idea five star. character design he's okay he's not a b**** so five stars. World background five stars

LV 1

Tsuukyni

Continue, e se possível aumente rapidamente a quantidade de capítulos!!! muito muito muito muito muito muito muito hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Otaku_Alucard_7002

This novel has been very fun I really loved the plot

Unfortunately short, the author said that the original ended abruptly. It's a good journey though. Keep up the transitions. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

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kyle_trolt

another op character novel that gets everything handed too him.im amazed that at 40ch he isn't killing gods .boring

LV 2

Gratiz_

I expected more from this fanfic. The story is just sooo booring. My brain shut down multiple times while reading this ff. I read about 10 chapters and time is precious. The system is meh and rewards are too powerful. Overall its an average fic. (3/5)

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Amelion

the story you wrote is really interesting, this is the best danmachi fanfic I have ever read. keep up the spirit of the writer.

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James_Schultis

Nice and different from others i have read. Thanks for the enjoyable world you have entered and brought me along for the ride

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LeonardoDiCaprio1

Man I like this book it's great simple stuff etc etc etc

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F_C3

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Elemise

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Bored_Reader_111

It's a good read. Definitely should give it a try👍💯💯

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Knoxuz

What is this thing ? Just one question, why give so many abilities to a character when all the fights are: "A monster appears, Ding +100 xp" End of the fight...

Novel boa Final dercha adegeja Romance etc Que divindade ele tem Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

LV 5

blackreaperkanek

quality of the writing is bad, and word choice and skill descriptions are terrible.