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Beyond Invincible
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In the bustling universe of heroes and villains, an unexpected twist occurs when an ordinary man, versed in the Invincible's universe, inexplicably wakes up in the formidable body of Nolan Grayson, also known as Omni-Man. As he grapples with this bizarre and overwhelming reality, he quickly realizes that he must adapt to the responsibilities and consequences that come with the title of Earth's mightiest protector.
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I feel like this is writtwn by AI. It's got a lot of the qualities that AI use when writing like information being repeated several times over before going on to the next thing and also language that most people just don't use when writing. It's an interesting concept so far even if it is AI generated so I'll keep reading and might change my review later. One last thing author if it is assisted by AI maybe just go through and proof read it so that you don't repeat the same thing so much.
Cool idea, I'll save this one for later when I have time to read a new story. I'm hoping the MC still has some of that omni man in him. Omni man was my favorite character in the series regardless of the fact that he was the bad guy.
From one Invincible fanfic writer to another, I fully support your vision of the story. Here's to hoping yours doesn't get influenced greatly by the negative comments that are sure to come. Anyway, good luck my friend! Cheers!
this novel is incredibly loyal and accurate to the source material and creates that same feeling of tension that the show did, while being different at the same time.
Burningnova13 Keep up the good work you can do this invincible fanfic idea directly after Beyond Invincible Being reborn as a Saiyan with the essence of the breeder in the world of Invincible is what Joesph would have asked for, but since he had read the comics and watched the show, He plans to make the most of his new life. OCs are mine All artwork down below can be found on Deviant art Harem 1. Sam Stevens(OC)(looks: The Road Trip by AIofDanann) 2. Olga 3. Aquaria 4. Mandy Palmer (OC)(looks: Road Trip 3 (3) by AIofDanannon) 5. Lana Karasaki (OC)(looks: Bimbo Style (193) by AndBuk) 6. Betsy Wilkins 7. Amy Simmons (OC)(looks: Road Trip (17) by AIofDanann) 8. Debbie Greyson 9. Leah Anderson (OC)(looks: Lazieajitlmxac by dahum22) 10. Vanessa 11. Dupli-Kate 12. Atom-Eve 13. Shrinking Rae 14. Katherine Matthews(OC)(looks: Prime Ministress - The Gala (12) by AIofDanann) 15. Andressa 16. Arabella (Hell comes to Frogtown) 17. Neera Young(Planet 51) 18. Cheryl Claws (Planet 51) 19. Luna (Planet 51) 20. Peggy Sue (Planet 51) 21. Lily (Planet 51) 22. Susan (Planet 51) 23. Lem’s Mom (no official name is given) (custom name is Amanda Korplog) 24. Lena Thackleman (Escape from Planet Earth) 25. Gabby Babblebrock(Escape from Planet Earth) 26. April Howsam His Looks
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Your writing captivated me from the very beginning. Your meticulous attention to grammar not only enhances the clarity of your writing but also reflects the respect you have for your fic. Your vivid scene descriptions make it easier to imagine what's happening, allowing me to immerse myself fully in the story. Moreover, the concept of the story is both compelling and thought-provoking, and I find myself wanting more. I have read your previous work and I hope you continue writing.