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I previously posted this fanfic and am currently rewriting it.
Also, English is not my native language, so some parts might be confusing to read.
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Waking up in the body of Nawaki Senju, a ninja student, I was only one year away from graduating and becoming a genin.
The fact that it had been 3 years since the second ninja war started made the original Nawaki eager to graduate as soon as possible to pursue his big dream: to become Hokage!
However, even though I retained Nawaki Senju's memories, I was no longer the same person.
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it's the same as the old FF nothing much has changed but for the people who have not read that one they will like it because pocket hunting dimension and Naruto these two concepts go together so well to create this great idea that makes you more interested in the story the more you read it I still hoped the MC was an otaku like the one in which Naruto was the MC so he would know all the information in advance and use all the abilities that can be gained in that situation but I get its important for the setup of this story if he was an otaku he would have become a mad scientist and started to implant everyone's cell's into his body he doesn't have naruto's nature to stop him from doing that but it is still a very good ff
I’m glad this is back. I was honestly bummed out that the story stopped along with Naruto. Both were great ideas. One hade future knowledge from a parallel universe and the other has absolutely no knowledge at all and is just doing whatever he has to do. Perfect combination of stories that has the same system but with different angles that don’t make them seem like they are just redundant and old. But ya I can’t give 5 stars though. Stability is an issue for me. Author has stoped and paused both stories many times and even lost his account that I had to stumble onto the story as if I was tripping over a 20 dollor wh**e. Hope this time there are no drops.
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I'll leave my review here, I hope this time the fanfic doesn't disappear. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
excellent blend of Naruto world and pocket hunting dimension , writing quality is better than previous fic, good character development so far , i really love this fic just don't drop it [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I really hope this isn't dropped. Thank you for your work so far. I am looking forward to more. And what is this based off (if anything)? Thanks :D
I pretty liked it but this doesn't matches to the characteristics given by kishimoto about nawaki since he died with a single blow in anime don't know much about manga though. Your imagination is pretty cool about a senju successor, very well keep it up
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What exactly will you be changing in this new rewrite? I really liked the other one before it was deleted .................
Спасибо большое команде переводчиков за вашу работу.Thank you very much to the translator team for your work. 작업해주신 번역팀에 진심으로 감사드립니다. 非常感謝翻譯團隊的工作。翻訳チームの皆様の仕事に心より感謝いたします。
The rewrite feels robotic and more verbose. Prolly ai assist with the editing. Not too much ai element tho
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The combination of Naruto and pocket hunting dimensions is interesting .................
How long until it gets back to where it was or did you drop it?..............................................................................................................................................
nah, if this isn't going to be popular, even I don't know your tastes, guys.it's just a pity that are 40 something chapters for now.Mc is ruthless, lacks a bit in the plans but growing to become a nara in intelligence without the laziness and I'm waiting for some good tsunade bed time like fr fr. she's struggling in there like a fish on land keke.till now is super okey, so at least try it.
Hi I m sorry you lost your fanfic but I was wondering if you have the chapters of the Naruto pocket dimension one and if you do will you be uploading and continuing the storyI was so hooked when you started exploring new Anime worlds with Naruto there was so much potential thereAnyway thank you for coming back
My Fanfinir account somehow disappeared, and then Fanfinir69 did too. Fanfinir was on Twitter, and it got banned for no apparent reason. The current Fanfinir69 simply glitched to the point of deleting all my fanfics. Even if I try to post on the Fanfinir69 account, it doesn't appear somehow. That's why I created this new account with a different name.