/ Sách&Văn học / A Marine butcher? I’m just fighting to live with everything I’ve got.
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Renn Hawk, armed with the mysterious Justice System, rises in the ranks of the Marines through ruthless efficiency. Every criminal he executes feeds him Justice Points, instantly empowering his Haki and strength. With “Slaughter Justice” as his creed, he wipes out entire pirate crews before their wanted posters even hit circulation—drawing the attention of the Admirals themselves. Akainu, Kizaru, and Aokiji all compete to recruit him, while Sengoku struggles to keep the balance. In this world ruled by the strong, can Renn Hawk carve his path as the Marines’ deadliest weapon of justice?
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Viết đánh giáThe novel is good, but one-third of each chapter consists of the soldiers being surprised and reacting to the conversations of MC and the people around him. Therefore, I do not recommend reading it. D d d d d d dd d d d d f f f f f f f f f f f ff f f
Very good so far, it's got potential Writing smells like gunpowder and steel. Hopefully it doesn't fall off into harem BS and lose the plot
it's really good I was supperised if this is a translation you did a good job I hope you continue and please update faster
First 2 chapters look really good! But is it a translation? I need to know that to set my expectations. :D
The story premise, the development, and everything is good. But the only problem is that, this translator doesn't seem to proof read the chapters. Because there are multiple times, the AI/Translator confuses between Tashigi and Hina. The Hibari name can be Skylark or Flower or something. And Kujaku's name can be Peacock like that. Sure, that's the meaning of their names, but stick to one thing bro. Overall, If you can get past those issues, this story is incredibly engaging. The MC is also not a bland character. He's bold. I am still reading this, so give it a try.
I am really looking forward to this novel, I believe it has great potential especially this FF in the One Piece verse with a Justice System that punishes you for not upholding justice. The MC is smart, hardworking and begins to cherish the Justice he is upholding. Not like the beginning where he doe's it in order not to die to the System. The Rewards are tempting and the more hardworking he is the more powers in terms of Haki, Bodystrength and Technique's will he be able to obtain. What more do you want from a One Piece FF.😍😍 It's very interesting and attracts readers like myself. Keep up with the good work 😊 You can make a goal fir everyone that for every 100-200 Powerstones you release an extra chapter for us. 300 Powerstones is too much. That way you will go up with the Powerstones Rankings way faster and it is better for us readers. win win 😁✌️ Thanks
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This fic is excellent. Its one of the few good Marine centered fics. The take on Zoro joining the Marines is really creative and new, I like it. With that being said it does have it's problems: Short chapters and confusing translated names. Author, you can use Grammarly to fix this problem or any other AI tool would get the job done. The confusing names really hurt the reading experience. Also, I wonder will there be any romance and Lemons. Cause we love lemons 😋
until now (on chp34) it's simply perfect . the writing the plot , how the system works it's just makes sense . 10/10 absolutely on my top 3 One piece ff's
Necesito que esta historia continue, estoy amando cada capitulo y no puedo parar de leer, solo te pido que sigas asi, es de lo mejor que e leido en años y necesito mas y mas, esperare con ansias el proximo capitulo
overall a pretty enjoyable read but it takes like 3 chapters for a single scene to play out, daily uploads are nice but when essentially nothing happens in a single chapter it becomes taxing to tune in everyday.
Hi author, I am a casual reader, and I recently came across your story, which I found truly impressive. I greatly admire your style of writing. May I ask how long you have been writing?
first time ive read a fic where magma dude wasnt written in a bad light and is on supporting cast for the ff mc. usually hes background character or the mid boss. also often gets insulted n shi
I started reading out of boredom and discovered a gem. Not over saturated with systems that give handouts. The character development is pretty solid.
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Hi, it’s your translator here. If you’re enjoying the story, I’d really appreciate it if you could take a moment to leave a review or rating. It helps a lot, and your support means even more. Thanks, and happy reading!