Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch

one of the best books i have read!!!! ,if you can can you add a 18+ scene after the atteck on the angel as like a way for the mc to relax. (the 18+ scene betwen the mc and a man)

first of all, the writer doesn't know how to do math or something cause every single number is incorrect, either the writer is lazy or didn't even finish grade 3 since it's fricking easy math. second of all, the writer didn't even mention the character descriptions except the fact she has these big sacs on her chest and curvy body and her hair, not even describing how the face looks. also a lot of grammatical mistakes which could be ignored but still and I Think the writer just doesn't want to complete the words, like for example the word t-shirt got spelled "tee" like dude, what? third of all there is no word background description, or at least not enough, the writer is even so bored he doesn't even want to describe the entrance to the castle, like where are the rooms, what is in there exactly, he just mentions there is a room with a bed and closet at least from chapter 15 and before.

This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly) Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution

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