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It is wrong to abuse psionic abilities in a Dungeon? Danmachi FF
3.45 (11 số lượng người đọc)
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Potions, magic items? Psychometry at it, and make your own!
Secret techniques and knowledge? Psychometry at it, now you have the knowledge to make a spirit contract!
Convince a misguided cute girl you want to help her? Well, she's thirsty for companionship so just be trustfull.
The MC name and personal memories were gone as he awoke as Sinns'krieger a green-haired pallum who died from a cursed item that killed his car crowd to Orario.
He soon takes notice of his new [psionic] abilities, when he tries to remember the body's past as he uses psychometry to learn how pallums are treated like (minor people) even his own height only reaches 143 cm as a young half-pallum.
He discovers some other uses for his abilities that inspired him to be "great" and discovers he was two years before Hestia came to the mortal realm...
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the story is ok, you should improve the grammar and the header a bit..............................................................................
I get your doing this for free and writings your hobby, but the English is jumbled at best and incoherent at worst. Maybe try using a program like grammarly and when you rewrite a chapter go over every sentence and ask yourself does this make sense? If I was an English teacher you would have gotten a d-, the only thing stopping the F is you tried In the first place
story started out good and interesting, but around chapter 10 the grammar degraded to that of a 8th graders.. with the characters constantly talking in the 3rd person.. (like riser phenex from dxd).. basically just constantly saying their own names as well as the persons they're talking to.. it is irritating and starts giving one migraines the more you try to follow along..
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