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Marvelous Grandmaster
4.66 (117 số lượng người đọc)
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Young man struck by lightning woke up with memories from the Star Wars universe during the old republic era. After several decades of battle alongside his friends and companions, he made the ultimate sacrifice to stop Vitiate’s final act of desperation. But his story did not end there like he expected.
“I’m alive? Hold up this is earth. HAHA I’M BACK!”
“Tony Stark is scheduled to give a weapons test in-“
“Wait...What?”
“Well...Fuck.”
{This fanfiction will also be posted onto Royalroad under the same name, HuntingFate.}
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I liked it up until chapter 16, When you start introducing future versions of the MC from alternate reality's then I start heading for the door.
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Really fantastic idea, I hope the author follows through on this story, there are a lot of stories that are dropped before they can start to show more promise. Writing quality is good and the characters background is interesting. I hope that he finds some way to get a lightsaber that would be cool. Can't wait for more!
This is GOLD. First time reading SW related FF and it is great. Good luck and hope more chapters to come Author.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
So far so good. While I have only read the 12 chapters that are out. The MC comes across as smart and practical. He is willing to eliminate threats to himself and his loved ones without remorse but doesn't go to the extent of being a murder hobo. Overall the stories read well with the likable and relatable MC and grammar is good enough and it does not slow the flow of reading. The only worry I have is that the MC will start having cliche villainous monologues and play with his prey too much allowing them to escape.
Up till I stopped reading this story, it was a rushed and messy flop. Unimpressive and unorganized to a frankly silly extent. It absolutely blows my mind this unreadable mess was rated as high as it is.
So far I'm going to give 3 stars. The main character does not give the impression of a wise master that has lived decades in the battlefield. He is more in line with what would happen if you gave a superpowers to a teenager, and this decreases the immersion.
Waste of time reading this trash. MC is a simp, a complete idiot, childish even after living in the Star Wars universe, awful idea for another version of the MC, and worst of all is that other people can have the Force so the MC isnt unique at all lol this is such a garbage story and a massive waste of time. This fic would be rated so much lower if the random accounts didnt spam 5/5 reviews lol awful story dont waste your time reading this trash
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
The story feels rushed and forced... combine that with a powerfull mc that thinks he knows it the best but doesnt follow his own advice.... You need a editor who gives you advice how to pace iit nd flesh it out more with a better timetable... not a trashy novel there you fullfill you wish with... to me its read like that...
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Great novel in comparison with all the others on this site. ....................................................................................
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The story is exactly what it says it is and a more I was going into this expecting a guy in marvel with force powers and a lightsaber built by money got by fighting crime but instead I got a guy with force powers that developed a company that was made by selling hoverbikes which already is a hook that is hard to pass up but then he also kills without care and is manipulative with a main character in the mcu and the best thing imo is that the ancient one is not trash this is the only fanfic that has made the ancient one good normally the ancient one is why I drop marvel fics but this one made me like the ancient one which is honestly insane because I really never could have guessed that I would ever like the ancient one good job author hopefully this continues
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Great potential and relatively quick updates look forward to seeing more.........................................................................
Grammar is looking good, the backstory is looking good and the start is looking good too. Even though the FanFic is only at 2 chapter right now, I can see that the story has lots of potential and I hope you continue this book!
it's an interesting take on if you had the force and tech of star wars in Marvel. wish the author would continue it but I reread it almost every month.
his personality didint change even after being jedi for years his parent dosent notice anyhting diffrent he behaves like child reveals that he is special to jean for no reason yeah no thanks mc is just stupid