Reborn as Asta

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TangSanHater

It had potential, I waited so long for an Asta SI fanfic but the MC is unrealistic, like he has been learning every day 24/7/365 for 10 years since he was five and learned every profession possible. MC Asta became too OP very early and he learned "Potions", "Breathing TechniqueS", "Unlimited Joints (from Baki)", "Enchantment", etc. Bro the things I was expecting from Fanfic was: 1. Asta learning swordsmanship because he knew he was gonna get swords. (Before Getting Grimoire) and focusing more on his physique (Asta wasted some time trying to "get" magic) 2. Train to sense Ki. (Before Magic Knights Exam, preferably Before Getting Grimoire) 3. Start to infuse Anti-Magic in his body for the power-up mode. (As soon as he got grimoire) 4. Try to talk to his Demon Step-bro (As soon as he gets the grimoire) 5. After that try to master the demon swords, Zetten all that. 6. Get girls and be more mature.

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Milf_isLife

Bro this has potential I have been searching for Asta fanfic a long time So I hope you dont drop it

LV 4

HooLeeFuk

Enjoying it so far. Hope you keep going.

LV 4

DaoistuBDitW

It's a good read and I never wanted to comment but lost interest just like how I lost interest in the actual Black Clover series. At first it was the long explanation of his status on almost all the chapters and now it's flashbacks, both of which I don't like. pls note, this is just my opinion.

LV 4

BoredCrow

It has potential like many others have been saying and for the love of god don't ruin it. make the people sound *human* and not like ai generated crap.

LV 1

Daoist369280

Ask in this story, can you expect that the girls with whom Asta interacts in the canon will be interested in him and be part of his harem or will you add oc girls or girls from other series because if so I recommend this one, it's called Fremy Speeddraw of the serie rokka no yuusha in addition to another alternative that would be that you make Asta learn senjutsu since that is based on natural energy and not the magic that you think

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Void_dragon_God

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gilgros

This is such a good story if you seen this, I’d recommend you try

LV 4

kokoilol

really good 😊 I know people complain about characters keeping up with him, even though he's way stronger than OG Asta. Yeah Yuno sees Asta on a daily basis training his ass off, you think he not training even harder to keep up. Also Yuno is already a once in a million genius monster with plot armor magick powers stacked on each power, it ain't farfetched hed be strong enough to fight Asta to a standstill or possibly win......... Overall it's a great 😃 fic.

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Madlion

Hi Author, I'm making this so that if anyone has any future ideas they'd like me to add to this fanfic or any future ability ideas or OC ideas just tell me about it cuz I like fan interaction and I think it'd be cool if everybody can put in their ideas into this fanfic s

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New_Dawn_9891

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nerghomek

Tiene mucho potencial, y se nota que el autor está mejorando mientras escribe, espero ver muchos más capítulos de este fic ‹________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________>

Hey just wanted to say you made a badass asta and I want more of this please it's a really good and well developed story so keep up the amazing work ill keep on supporting you and hope to see more amazing storytelling just take you time but please hurry sorry I know it's a contradiction but im hooked anyway thanks again for the awesome story