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Tensura: Saiyan Warrior
4.29 (17 số lượng người đọc)
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A Man who died and reincarnated into a saiyan
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story is bland he wishes to be a Saiyan doesn't know what a zenkai boost is. he becomes vegito with 2 battle power weaker that the farmer and most importantly follows rimuru around like a lost puppy so story has no originality
Very confusing, very convoluted, and very much filled with writing errors. First chapter is filled with cliches and it doesn't seem the plot has changed much in the few chapters I forced myself to read. the core story might be decent but there is a lot of work that needs to be done beforehand. Practice makes perfect, maybe after a few more stories you'll have picked up the tools to truly write a well - rounded story but til then ill have to pass. Good luck.
I enjoyed it, nice story. Updates are regular.It would be nice if the chapters were longer.I enjoyed it, nice story. Updates are regular.It would be nice if the chapters were longer.I enjoyed it, nice story. Updates are regular.It would be nice if the chapters were longer.I enjoyed it, nice story. Updates are regular.It would be nice if the chapters were longer.
This fan fiction is going very well so far and I like reading it alot the only thing that needs to be done author is that whenever you start a paragraph make it start with a capital letter it's not much but for me it makes reading stuff here look better
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Interessante, Very good....................................................Interessante, Very good....................................................Interessante, Very good....................................................
Needs more work keep practicing on grammar and structure otherwise I enjoyed it
This is good stuff right here guys...lts one of the fanfics I'm most excited about...lts the one that inspired me write my own fanfic... Not because lts so good but.. Because I can't wait for more Chapters so I just write my own [img=update]
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
very good, I want more.......................................................very good, I want more.......................very good, I want more
Can you make the Mc more genius because he look like an idiot and why is there so meny men around Mc should there be women because it's a Harem novel can you make it Harem not gay Mc please
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Dejastes de subir capitulo ha pasado 1 mes no ha vuelto a subir capitulo la dejaste abandonada???????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍
I'm a writer so five stars! If you have ideas or suggestions or even criticism please write in the comments. I hope you like it, I'm still a beginner when it comes to writing novels, and English isn't my language, so sorry if the grammar is messy.