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The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
4.49 (155 số lượng người đọc)
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The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over. My second life brought me to a world where people breath fire, walk on water and some people with special eyes that give them bullsh#t powers. Well, I got the gamer ability. And I’m gonna use it to stand at the peak. But it's gonna be a long journey before I reach that summit. SI - MC.
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one of the best Naruto fic as well as air fic too. here Mc isn't op as heck, but he is much stronger than his age group, so no op Mc when he is a child. the Grammer is very good,like perfect and that's very rare to find on web novel, the update stability is also good, and the personality of Mc is that of a calm and cautious person. he isn't getting arrogant just because he is stronger than people of his age and is still cautious of others overall this fic is one of the best on web novel.
Chapter 137. tldr: Discount system. I say if you want OP go big or go home, the author tries to balance it (with some plot manipulation) by hyping the MC then reminding us, constantly, he is not powerful as such and such and it generates is frustration It's basically a rehash of the canon story from another POV. Even the times author makes sure to remind with a chapter title "divergent from canon" it has little to no impact on the story (so far). It's a good read if you can ignore a lot of details. Writing quality 5 - No complaints at all. Updated 4 - Decent. Story 3 - It's 85% training montage. Some filler, some interaction. (A bit more interaction in latest chapters). Character 4 - Bland. The MC trains. He is not really smart, a lot of his decisions are based on results from quests (Do I tell other people something and risk this quest result, or not tell. Never considering this are people he trusts and keeping it from them is.... not a nice thing to do, its all about the quests). World 3 - Copied world. No explanation on places, no introduction. It is a lot of assumptions the readers know. If you don't have good details on Naruto, geography, history..... you will miss a lot. It's a discount system. There is a constant hype of the MC "talent", yet at the same time constant reminders how others are better (at the same age, Itachi), constant reminders how there are others more powerful (granted, they are older, but then he is not really powerful). A lot of missed opportunities, that many comments about, that are ignored to prevent the MC being too powerful. A lot of forced, yet subtle, nerfs (ie the reminders of "But that person is more powerful" then you find that person is low Jonin but the MC has double the chakra). The worse part, if you consider it, is the MC has an ability he got early in the novel to basically use telekinesis a kin to X-Men type, it clearly said he can perform atomic manipulation. This was kind of a dud in the story since the MC completely ignored it. If he trained that and aimed for stats for that no one could stop him.
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OK so I'm about 60 something chapters deep in this fanfic and honestly it's the best on webnovel, as far as Naruto goes. It has stayed true to the gamer system insert. World building loosely follows Canon I'd say(personally I don't think we're in far enough to where changes are really impactful). Where this novel shines for me is the character development and the use of the gamer system, he's kept busy and progressing without grinding to hokage over the weekend basically and his advantages are starting to show over time. I think it's very well done to also illustrate the MCs thought process on how to develop himself skill wise as that's the main power of the gamer, controlling and monitoring your growth. The other characters in the novel feel like they did in original Naruto and I think the newly added characters are very well chosen where it makes sense for them to exist but they were never mentioned. All in all a 10/10 from me, I would recommend this to anyone looking for a Naruto fanfic or gamer theme novel. As it really ticks both boxes independently without any issues.
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Why do you even write a fanfic with gamer ability if you are going it to nerf it to the ground? All that numbers yet they don't feel like worth a thing. Just like empty promises.Just create any other system power. This is just... sad and dissapointing. I am not even talking about forced plot.
I have read up to 270 chapters after putting my review here. Author has a good writing style and a stable world background. But my god is this novel so frustrating to read! It,s chapter 270 and upt to this point it has all been a big fat training arc! MC at this point 12 years old, hasnt graduated to chunin, has S rank strength, mastered 5 nature chakra by the age of 9 years old, mastered medic jutsu, is on the way to master sealing jutsu and the canon story has just now started! Such a ridiculous story development! And the MC always gets his powers handed to him on a plate, ally here & there to help him, inspirations when he needs it and no original jutsus he has created! And i stil cant figure out if the MC wants to be a hero, villain or anti-hero, his character all over the place!
First of all id like to say that this is one of the best-written Naruto fanfictions I've read. It doesn't suddenly turn into some harem ecchi novel and it focuses on the power methods (mostly) in the naruto world. Why did it end up with a 3.6 rating? Let me explain and if the author is reading then I hope this review helps. Writing quality (4*): The writing quality is ok with no bad spag (spelling, punctuation, and grammar) and you can see it get better as the story progresses. You can definitely see the author's improvements. I gave it 4* though since the writing quality isn't anything mind-blowing but still flows nicely and is very readable. Story development (3*): Ok so the start of the story was very cliche and I feel sets a rather bland tone for the story. He is some rich unmotivated kid with no real friends in school, gets stage 3 cancer and runs out of the hospital, sees a cat and while crossing the road is involved in a car accident. He then gets adopted by a powerful old ninja who helps him to train to become stronger because he has been told to do so by a mysterious individual. Now there isn't anything bad per se with this setup but isn't anything groundbreaking either. Not to mention making the audience feel not super engaged with the story. Later on, he is thrust into interacting with the Hokage and some other heavy hitters while still in the academy, and once he finally graduates he is so far ahead of the main cast it's pretty laughable. He also is a rather righteous person which was a bit of a letdown since I do enjoy a more neutral leaning Mc. The fact he is in the shinobi world makes that even more odd since the story is a lot darker than you realize at first. With genocides, war constantly occurring and the leaf village being just as bad even with the preaching of peace I would have expected him to at least be less naive. Still, he does get fairly strong, and although I don't agree with some of his choices like with the Uchiha massacre and the way he was dragged into that plot his reactions and actions do fit into how he has been portrayed so far. A few ideas that could help could be getting the 3 tails that is in the lake if he hasn't been grabbed by the Akatsuki already, the peacock method could be explored, giving him other summons to learn from, learn or explore how hydrificaton works and if he can use other elements, even turn into a mist (plus with poison, he could become a poison mist or even make poison mist clones). So the story is a 3* in my opinion, definitely could be better and I can only hope he can he doesn't become some Saint or savior of everyone and everything in need. Character design (3*): the characters do fit their canon designs and their interactions do flow nicely and fit. However, the reason it's a 3* is because of the two main Oc Kensei and Daichi. Kensei is the old man who adopted Daichi and while he is ok doesn't really have too much depth to him and is there mainly to kind of help shield him from the big players a little and to give Daichi a mentor figure who trains him. He does what he is supposed to though so no real complaints. Daichi is a pretty typical mc. Nothing really special which is why I wasn't too surprised or disappointed with his good leaning. Would have been way more interesting if he was just fully selfish and thought about himself. Still, I am happy with the no romance (which I hope stays that way) and the confirmation of no harem. Update stability (5*): updates are very regular which is nice, especially for when you want to wait for a little and binge all the new chapters at once. World background (3*): it's just the naruto world which isn't too exciting but the methods of training the elements are very interesting. Hope things can continue in that vein.
I'm a new reader and I really like this story. I just hope there will be no romance cause they ruin every good FanFic out there. Please Author God, do not include romance 🙏
The fanfiction is good, but I don't agree with some actions, so I don't give four stars --------------------- Maybe I'll change my mind later. And I will give you more stars
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At chapter 200. Fic is okay, very vanilla slice of life. Like author can’t come up with anything interesting to write about. MC doing mediocre things for a gamer and nothing new worth while happens. Gamer ability very nerf. cant waste my time reading this anymore. At chapter 200 nothing exciting yet is too slow pace.
Bro the mC is way too good im completly shocked with the way the author easily slides the mc through difficult situations. Also why not convert it into an animated series with permission from tokyo tv cause this will end naruto’s TRP and watcher count. Good Luck with the Story. Pls do supporrt this story it DESERVES IT!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
story development is really bad. It took 145 chapters to graduate from the Academy. I don’t like too big story where you have 700-800 chapter.
The Gamer system here is pretty underwhelming and weak. All Mc does is stupid, he never grind skill, never think way ahead. all his skills are basically what he watched from anime or from ninjutsu scroll.. Leaf concentration (for chakra control), Chakra thread, shuriken jutsu, 5 C-level element jutsu, etc. Also his skills aren't that strong despite being in lvl 70-90.. just trash. his shuriken jutsu at lvl 90 cant beat Itachi's from sasuke's story (probably itachi was 12 at that time). Proficiency system, not gamer system
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Read the entire story up to the lastest chapter as of the 26/12/2022. This story is perhaps, one of the most solid Naruto fic's I've ever had the pleasure to read, without going into spoilers the power progression is very smooth and logical, the author is knowledgable on the source material even some 'minor' and easily forgotten pieces of 'trivia' around the Narutoverse can be found here and they are also open to other's informing them about said trivia or details that they might have missed or had a bit wrong. The characters themselves all feel like genuine people, the dialogue is again smooth and the way they act again 'feels' as if they actually belong to the world. The updates have been stable for as long as I have been reading this story -at least a month and a half now- with no hiatus or break. The quality of writting is also incredibly impressive not only by the standards of fic's but just in general and this helps with both the story development and world background tremendously which both are great on their own. Recommend that anyone with an interest in Naruto at least take a look.
Best Naruto-Gamer fanfic I read til now.(i have read dozens). Currently at Ch 119. Even though story is a little slow paced (author keeps apologizing for it), it is NOT even tiny bit Boring. Really loved how the interactions between characters going... Gamer interface is perfect and neat. (In most gamer fics, it usually kind of gets out of control as the story progresses...and become weird).
It was very intresting read i have to say. Pros: -balanced system (mc has to train a lot to get stronger) -dynamic and well written fights -progression is just great to read -worldbuilding and story Cons: -a lot of info dumps (a lot of nonsense %, a lot of nonsense skills, a lot of nonsense stats) - too little action for my liking (dungeons were fine but outside of it theres nothing) -author trying everything to make emotional attachments for mc which is tyring
Any fanfic of Naruto & Harry Potter where the insert MC lets the physical, emotional, and mental abuse of Naruto & Harry continue even though they can help just to maintain the plot or some BS reason that this abuse is integral to their development as a person is an immediate negative for me. They are CHILDREN. You wouldn't want your self in that position, much less a child. Its another issue if the MC cant help with Uchiha massacre, thats too much for a child or a single person to change, that I understand. But to not do something, to not help a child suffering from abuse every single day even though you can help and do something is just disgustingly selfish. They don't need to be a saviour but at least help. At least be a friend that they can talk to and confide. Anyway, aside from this, this a good story with potential. I would just like to comment that it shows too much stats. I've read so many fanfic like this and they all became increasingly repetitive and boring. It becomes a pain for both author and readers. Just limit showing it. Just my two cents. Hope this story continues to progress. Good luck Author-san. More power to you.
it's quite nice and well made. no obvious mistakes or very difficult grammar too understand. the author seems to be making the character have an impact even early on which is kinda rare to even find an impact full character. so even under 20 chapters a bit early to tell I think it's going to be quite good and I'm hopeful the author will continue to post regularly.
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Author's Shameless 5 Star Review. A few points about the story - A reborn Gamer in the Naruto world. - No Harem. No pairings decided. - I'll try to stay as authentic to the Naruto world as possible. Meaning no Haki or Nen or Ki. -But I might give him mana in a very limited capacity. - Updates 3 times a week but that could increase.