/ Fantasy / Weak Constitution? I Instead Created The Mage System
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An accident caused Ron to be transmigrated to a world of swords and magic. There was no fancy magic here, only breathing techniques that had reached their peaks.
However, Ron was born with a weak constitution. His innate ability was considered low. He was told that he was useless and would be unable to practice cultivation his entire life. He could not accept this. He decided that he had to forge his own path.
As fate would have it, he discovered that there was a rainbow-colored crystal in his mind. Through meditation, he could sense free flowing multi-colored lights in the air around him.
The red light was scorching hot, the blue one was cool while the green one was refreshing and full of life. Ron was dumbfounded. What was this?
He subconsciously absorbed the light spots and moved them towards the tip of his fingers. A fireball appeared and burnt his door to a crisp.
From that day forth, there was a new job class on the continent known as the mage.
When some of Ron’s enemies saw him appear on the street with his weak constitution, they wanted to ambush him. Before they could approach him, they found themselves in hell.
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It's a shame really, the novel lift my hope up, only to let it crash down. The first few chapters introduce us to a MC who receive this mage power without any ideas on how to use it effective. I was hoping that MC would travel the martial world to get inspiration and to better his meditation. But no, chapter 20, boom! You now have body-temper technique as well as best meditation techniques for free! I ponder. What the point of those 20 chapters if you're just give him best meditation technique and body-temper then!? This is like original author writing a decent novel, but drop quality for lazy writing! Was that for phishing new readers? Anyway, I'm disappointed!
Good plot/bad execution I like the idea about a MC who creates something new instead receive some random anciant ultra mega technique. But the execution is ,frankly, pretty bad.
Good pacing and promising setting. I have only read 25 ch so far so I can’t say too much but I think it will be an enjoyable read.
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Disappointing, title says he created the mage system but he just remember the things and it works...
gave it a try thinking the synopsis wasn't making it justice but I was wrong, it's trash
I liked the MC personality, its different then typical MC in other Novel. he is not east to bully by Woman, and wont back up just becoz he is been accused wrong for something Unreasonable, and the way MC handling it really satisfying at least until chapter 40... but little disapointment, becoz the mage skill that he has, not from zero but from some entity knowledge...n he is not doing any first experiment, he is not the beginning, a true beginning just as I hope after I read the synopsis. but overall I like the Story, MC is Top G
I am qurious as to how the author is going to work the whole breathing techniques into the magic users path. I really can't see what direction the story and plot are heading. It makes me want to read more.
Nothing is perfect .. There are some flaws .. Let's put them aside .. I enjoyed reading it .. I wish I knew the raw link .. I hope that its translation will be completed ..😔
Raw? .