I'm not a teacher and you don't need to be to realize that description sucked 😕.
After seeing Mahiro's appearance, Rias had a little disbelief in her eyes.
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
you liked your own comment.
After seeing Mahiro's appearance, Rias had a little disbelief in her eyes.
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
you mean like yesterday.
Rias's heart became more and more shocked. Originally, Mahiro was just a boy who admired her in her heart, but she didn't expect that she had not seen him for a while, and he had given her such a wonderful surprise.
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
Rias had a look of disbelief in her eyes.
After seeing Mahiro's appearance, Rias had a little disbelief in her eyes.
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
I already knew that but he's writing this in English and I think he should use the English name for it as the Japanese name sounds weird.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Anime & Comics · RenanPMoraes
Item: Physical Fitness Enhancement Card (ten times)
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
He needs strength, so getting the system to reward him faster will be beneficial For him in these stages, when the plot hasn't progressed.
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
Karek glanced over, raising an eyebrow. "First time?"
Movies · CORNBRINGER
where is all this money coming from ?? as he should have spent it all halfway through the chapter
With a heavy sigh, I looked at my remaining balance. 36,000 credits. I had burned through my funds quickly, but all for a good cause. I hoped.
Movies · CORNBRINGER
don't want to have refer to image aim
I purchased the weapon, feeling the weight materialize in my hand. I inspected it. It looked just like the blasters I had seen in the movies, but more… real, it was hard to explain.
Movies · CORNBRINGER
he has levels ??
A wry smile crossed my face. If only leveling up could make me less nervous about the impending exchange. I had no way of knowing how this would end. Nevertheless, every point counted in this game of survival. I hastily redirected three points into Intelligence and two into Agility.
Movies · CORNBRINGER
his power level is higher than this as he is listed as having a power level of 1500 or 1600.
Survival Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Anime & Comics · RenanPMoraes
there's no hate. if I remember this one correctly this was just basically a generic psychopath gamer fanfic where there was no fun twist to it at all. As these can be a lot of fun to read when the authors take some creative liberties with it.
[God has gift you with the special ability: The Gamer]
Book&Literature · Kitamari
ugh far stronger regenerators have died in DBZ Canon. so you're not really safe from everyone
"After absorbing all the power and knowledge of Shanks, I feel safe in this dangerous universe. Besides that, I also have Ryujin Jakka, one of the strongest Zanpakutō in Bleach, and it's complemented by Sun Breathing. I can already call myself the hottest man on the planet, haha."
Anime & Comics · copycopychan
the only template I can think of that would be useful refer to image
"This system is a unique gacha system, which means the host will be rewarded with items, skills, and character templates that don't exist in this world."
Anime & Comics · copycopychan
This planet does not need to develop planting and production, and the resources needed for growth rely only on one method.
Sci-fi · Karthik08
great they can now resort to cannibalism.
[Transformation: After transformation, Amosi has reached a super-one form, and his combat power has increased to normal X50. ]
Sci-fi · Karthik08
if nothing else can survive on the planet but a Saiyan because of the gravity what are the saiyans going to eat?? as there appetite one of the most ferocious in fiction.
And when Saiyan is on the verge of death, he can explode with powerful combat power and transform at the same time.
Sci-fi · Karthik08
As for Banhua, she also returned to Li Shuibao's side again at this moment, calling him brother Bao.
Sci-fi · Karthik08
ugh 😩 another one of these they all suck ass. just from the intro alone I can tell you screwed the pacing up and by that I mean how quickly the main character becomes overpowered. As no one who has an IQ over 60 wants to read about some overpowered Gary stew and the only exception to that would be if he was extremely funny. as normal people are more interested in the journey of how he gets there then the destination. I also don't understand why every writer who uses a similar premise to this idea starts there MC out in a major ninja village. as it would probably be better to start the main character out in an unnamed village by the series. As the major villages would have to have been supported by minor farming and fishing villages that didn't have any importance in the series. as these villages are less likely to rat him out as a unique bloodline holder as they are more removed from the propaganda that each ninja village uses. As the way I see it each ninja village is a hub of civilization for their countries like examples New York or Los Angeles or Detroit. as one of the major problems I would imagine with this idea or an ideas similar to it. is that the main character should have a tail like a Saiyan and this should out him as a unique bloodline holder and the problem with that is they're seen as a source of power for the village and since he be the only one they would want to withhold him from any missions that would put him at serious risk of dying and depending on what village they might use him as a breeding stud to bring more of his unique bloodline into the village to increase their military might down the line and most fanfics just brush over this problem like it doesn't exist and that's just terrible.
As a Saiyan, Do I Have Unlimited Potential?
Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz