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ugh 😩 another one of these they all suck ass. just from the intro alone I can tell you screwed the pacing up and by that I mean how quickly the main character becomes overpowered. As no one who has an IQ over 60 wants to read about some overpowered Gary stew and the only exception to that would be if he was extremely funny. as normal people are more interested in the journey of how he gets there then the destination. I also don't understand why every writer who uses a similar premise to this idea starts there MC out in a major ninja village. as it would probably be better to start the main character out in an unnamed village by the series. As the major villages would have to have been supported by minor farming and fishing villages that didn't have any importance in the series. as these villages are less likely to rat him out as a unique bloodline holder as they are more removed from the propaganda that each ninja village uses. As the way I see it each ninja village is a hub of civilization for their countries like examples New York or Los Angeles or Detroit. as one of the major problems I would imagine with this idea or an ideas similar to it. is that the main character should have a tail like a Saiyan and this should out him as a unique bloodline holder and the problem with that is they're seen as a source of power for the village and since he be the only one they would want to withhold him from any missions that would put him at serious risk of dying and depending on what village they might use him as a breeding stud to bring more of his unique bloodline into the village to increase their military might down the line and most fanfics just brush over this problem like it doesn't exist and that's just terrible.

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Replied to heavenlydawn_

you liked your own comment.

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After seeing Mahiro's appearance, Rias had a little disbelief in her eyes.

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_

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Commented

you mean like yesterday.

Rias's heart became more and more shocked. Originally, Mahiro was just a boy who admired her in her heart, but she didn't expect that she had not seen him for a while, and he had given her such a wonderful surprise.

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_

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He needs strength, so getting the system to reward him faster will be beneficial For him in these stages, when the plot hasn't progressed.

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_

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Karek glanced over, raising an eyebrow. "First time?" 

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Movies · CORNBRINGER

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where is all this money coming from ?? as he should have spent it all halfway through the chapter

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With a heavy sigh, I looked at my remaining balance. 36,000 credits. I had burned through my funds quickly, but all for a good cause. I hoped.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Movies · CORNBRINGER

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don't want to have refer to image aim

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I purchased the weapon, feeling the weight materialize in my hand. I inspected it. It looked just like the blasters I had seen in the movies, but more… real, it was hard to explain.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Movies · CORNBRINGER

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Commented

he has levels ??

A wry smile crossed my face. If only leveling up could make me less nervous about the impending exchange. I had no way of knowing how this would end. Nevertheless, every point counted in this game of survival. I hastily redirected three points into Intelligence and two into Agility.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Star Wars: Galactic System.

Movies · CORNBRINGER

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Commented

ugh far stronger regenerators have died in DBZ Canon. so you're not really safe from everyone

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"After absorbing all the power and knowledge of Shanks, I feel safe in this dangerous universe. Besides that, I also have Ryujin Jakka, one of the strongest Zanpakutō in Bleach, and it's complemented by Sun Breathing. I can already call myself the hottest man on the planet, haha."

saiyan? nah I'm not

saiyan? nah I'm not

Anime & Comics · copycopychan

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the only template I can think of that would be useful refer to image

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"This system is a unique gacha system, which means the host will be rewarded with items, skills, and character templates that don't exist in this world."

saiyan? nah I'm not

saiyan? nah I'm not

Anime & Comics · copycopychan

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This planet does not need to develop planting and production, and the resources needed for growth rely only on one method.

Planet for All : Start to Build a Saiyan Civilization

Planet for All : Start to Build a Saiyan Civilization

Sci-fi · Karthik08

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Commented

great they can now resort to cannibalism.

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[Transformation: After transformation, Amosi has reached a super-one form, and his combat power has increased to normal X50. ]

Planet for All : Start to Build a Saiyan Civilization

Planet for All : Start to Build a Saiyan Civilization

Sci-fi · Karthik08

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As for Banhua, she also returned to Li Shuibao's side again at this moment, calling him brother Bao.

Planet for All : Start to Build a Saiyan Civilization

Planet for All : Start to Build a Saiyan Civilization

Sci-fi · Karthik08

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