DarkDaoist - Profile

looks like author is in a dump and can no longer think of any plot besides kidnapping and ruins exploration. you should take a break and do a world building first and them comeback. latest kidnapping is utter nonsense he saw the raiders coming so he could've simply hidden himself, not the first time he hid from sky sovereigns using forbidden energy either.

did you ask AI to write your response or too illiterate to write a cohesive sentence.

MC ends up being a savior of the world while still lower level than others, MC commits genocide down to the last grim infant from all the hiding points that the previous savior couldn't do due to his taboo energy, they all ascend including his sister, mom and friends as the world is not able to bear stronger level people, they plant a world tree seedling and hope it can elevate the world to higher level, MC gets his teacher pregnant and is on his way to find her.

story is good, there's lot of plot armor but still worth the read. author builds up suspense with unsurmountable odd, only for it to be resolved by deux machina.

MC has some personality and has a dialogue but that's about it. all his fights are easy and full of plot armor, he hardly get injured and when he's about to opponent chickens out or something else. there really is no suspense as he can powerup in an instant like learning techniques and fighting style whereas other contractors are a mile behind. it's good if you want a change of pace from beta MC's or slow progression but deeply average as far as writing goes.

MC is a Mary Sue with bipolar disorder, MC doesn't have a system but can do everything anyone ever did with systems help and training for years. the story feels like MC was teenager when because he wears his emotions on his sleeve, can't think or do things through without putting himself in awkward or forced situations. it's a good story if you just feel the flow but full of cringe if you try to rationalize it

This is more of documentary than a novel, more than half the novel is updating statistics of Pokémon's on regular basis. there are few new features to potential, variants, and evolutions but its honestly a drag to read on and on about them. MC is OP for Pokémon world but 160 chapters in there's no progress in story, if you can call the one sided narration and book keeping that. This is for you if you get excited by updating numbers and stats on character sheets.

I don't think author even understands what being sloth truly means, MC is a bored character at best and hardly lazy with him jumping around to gain power he should be named anything but sloth. if you want to read about MC who is true slot try 'The Lazy King'.

Grammar and Sentence formations are horrible and that's that. if you can get past this major flaw it's actually very good novel and that is focused on MC becoming Over Powered through his own efforts and not through some bullsh*t plotholes, bloodline and inheritances which makes no sense on power level scaling. MC has his lucky chances too but those are mainly dependent upon MC's smarts, willingness to risk his life and his pets. MC trains till he is near death continuously on regular basis just to have same strength as mob characters. Eventually MC starts becoming OP after he creates his own Celestial Inheritance.