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Thank god you're starting this relationship early instead of waiting 500 chapters of drama and misunderstandings...

I almost like Raven, she just needs a little more development to learn how to not be annoying to people. Also poor Terence waiting forever on the hill while those 2 go into the rift hahaha

I have to give it to you. The combat scenes actually look great now, using most of his skills to attack the weak points and being smart. This is easily becoming one of my favorite novels. Thank you for the hard work. You have been on fire with the releases. Also, don't forget to rest sometimes.

Very good closure for this section. I liked it a lot.

Man, Im gonna be honest, I really like this novel, but you gotta hold back on these exaggerated descriptions. When I read a fight, I try to picture it in my head and this is completely throwing me off, it feels like it's 1000 chapters too early for this kind of descriptions. I know you're probably having a lot of fun writing this, but a novel needs to be believable within it's own universe.

He might even put his family at risk, he's still too weak.

I agree that It's getting annoying seeing everyone humiliating the mc, but I'm also annoyed that he wants to get the boat and go home, considering that something bad will probably happen to him once the principal finds out.

Finally, the fight is here. Tftc

Great, he got a soul orb for him and a savant core for Mira (i assume). Also, F for all the dead people. TFTC

I hope it drops a variant soul orb, and he doesn't get ramdonly blamed for this

Im really enjoying this part of the novel, tftc

Ok i fixed it by clearing the app cache for anyone with the same problem

The title updated for me but not the chapter, maybe it takes a while

I spend points on this