Webnovel Author: Yolo_Natss - Novel Collection

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How to begin? The story has potential but is bland and missing some spices. I have read until ch20 so idk what the story is afterwards. But until ch20 I wish the MC was the protagonist Raphaelle, he looks much more entertaining. The story with the current MC is boring. MC is a genius in term of magic but instead of capitalizing on that the story focus on his physical training ? The MC is almost emotionless and kind of robotic. We don’t know a lot about him, we don’t know much about what he thinks, what he likes, what are his aspirations or goals other than « I’ll die on 3-5 years, I have to become stronger ». He compare himself with the protagonist exclusively in physical strength ? Like, hello ?

Such a shame, the story got me really hooked but the writing quality makes it a headache to read and understand. Fast passed, the story is going fast, random things happens when there is already something going on. Characters interactions could be more deep and meaningful, tbh I didn’t feel that much emotions and thoughts behind the conversations. Also I don’t quite yet understand the MC on a deeper level, he just does stuffs.

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