I would like to keep with the main characters with kingdom developement :)
ch 149 [interlude]The army with a state II
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
The stats part does not make that much sense. There should be a difference. 15 levels x2 stats are 30 more strength.
ch 45 Training Outside Part 1
Games · Follower_of_Abadom
How many times are her looks going to be mentioned? Yes, green eyes, blond hair, looks like a fairy…is it for word count?
ch 105 0105 The Door to Ruins
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
Because even though you have written him as always being careful, he is risking it by getting cursed on purpose. He could instead get his memories back, less risky and since it was information maybe related to the development of the world he is at, definitely indispensable.
ch 35 035 The Curse Of The Dark Lord
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
this was not a chapter...it was complete filler.
ch 119 Chapter 119
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
This last chapters are way to forced.
ch 106 Chapter 106: Sorry Hufflepuff
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
He is a gnome, low heath and a glass canon. On the other side our MC has quite an amazing DPS, so that it’s not a really valid reason. It’s the same as the king, you need an antagonist, but since you made them quite hateful, the reasons for allowing them to live are not enough to push through logic.
ch 71 Ranged Enemies, Part 2
Games · Galanar
75% of the chapter is filler description. After a great fight on the one before I expected more.
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How can he equip anything if he doesn’t have the necessary stats that are required to equip it?
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 - Abundant Loot and Upgrading
Movies · _Crimson_
I’m really liking the novel…but I don’t understand this chapter at all. You are saying that 2 booklets of outdated skill to increase mana reg (that I’m sure asking their parents would have helped) cost the same (actually more) of 5 chances that give you in cases 50% in others lower probability of having more affinity? I don’t think it’s a good trade at all.
ch 23 Cultivation Skills
Fantasy · ScotchTy
How does hammer have the suits made if the twins didn’t allow Rhodes to take the suit to the us Army?
ch 19 Chapter 19 – Responsibility
Movies · GodOfFreedom
Great chapter. BTW, will the mass release happen?
ch 596 Big Brother
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
The same with moving around London by himself.
ch 13 Going Home
Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
Bad grammar, characters actions and more specifically how they act or behave is nonsense or out of character, story development is decent at most, …
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Anime & Comics · Tobi_444