Huy hiệu 9
Moments 13
Uh oh now you spoiled us and we’re all going to expect alternate titles for every chapter going forward
Alternate title: Theatrics two electric bugaloo.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
Ha nice
Bright red eyes met his own as the armored figure called out to him "Wake the fuck up legionnaire, we have rebels to burn."
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
Aboard the black ship
A thought on the minor characters. Adding more members to their secret meeting place could work with short time jumps and brief intros with Tom maybe using it as a way to recruit talent you know finding smart kids and bringing them into the fold so to speak to make them feel special so he can use them later on down the line maybe once Minerva graduates since she might not be to open to the idea
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Was enjoying this story so shame about dropping it but your right it’s your story and you shouldn’t have asked for opinions. If you restart the story or start a new one altogether then I would suggest not even reading the comments until you have the story firmly established.
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Different Batman
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
One thing is that you made your Mc way to strong way to fast he’s op to the point that there isn’t any suspense in anything he does if he wants to do something he does it with little to no issues or set backs meaning you could literally just make a list of his accomplishments and it would be just as suspenseful
The story seems to be losing interest. I might take a break to go back to the drawing board.
Humanity Unchained
Book&Literature · Vincent_0580