Nitrox2

16d

Commented

The problem is not the pace, it's the information in each chapter. If the chapter don't bring significant development to your story, increase the pace of just time skip.

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Nitrox2

24d

Posted

Why the fuck would you post an MTL translation on this site without editing ?

Douluo: Awaking the spirit body at the Beginning

Others · Harsh_Dhaliwal

Nitrox2

1mth

Posted

excellent fanfiction. It lack a bit of character and world development but if the story continu, I hope it will be resolved.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

Anime & Comics · Yesnth

Nitrox2

1mth

Commented

Can you create a patreon account please ?

ch 0 4 The Melancholy of Astoria Greengrass

The Seducer System (Harry Potter)

Video Games · Percypendragon3

Nitrox2

1mth

Posted

I looked for copper and I found gold. Extremely good story with 14 chapters. I hope the autor will release chapter with the samequality in the future !

Reverend Insanity :Savage Truth

Others · Forthememes

Nitrox2

2mth

Commented

It was really interesting. Don’t be afraid to have a MC with exceptional talent. It will be necessary later in the story to justify some situations

ch 0 6 **Chapter 6: Vital Gu**

Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable

Book&Literature · ACDPQS

Nitrox2

2mth

Commented

Burning damage halve physical attack in pokemon games btw. If a machamp was burned, it’s normally over for him

ch 19 Chapter 19: Battle Between Masters

Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)

Anime & Comics · BoredAsura

Nitrox2

2mth

Replied to ACDPQS

Exactly

ch 0 4 **Chapter 4: Awakening**

Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable

Book&Literature · ACDPQS

Nitrox2

2mth

Commented

Again, Nice chapter. The power stone are usefull to gain visibility in the fanfiction ranking (story Must have at least 15k words)

ch 0 4 **Chapter 4: Awakening**

Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable

Book&Literature · ACDPQS

Nitrox2

2mth

Commented

Original, I like it

ch 0 3 **Chapter 3: Path to Walk, or Path to Run**

Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable

Book&Literature · ACDPQS

Nitrox2

3mth

Commented

It doesn’t make sense why heaven will want to kill him. As an otherworldly demon, he didn’t defy fate. For exemple thieving venerable was a venerable because It was the will of heaven will. It’s not clear or it’s AU

ch 18 The Siege of Perdition

Reverend Insanity-Blood Venerable Ascension

Book&Literature · CreedFollower

Nitrox2

3mth

Commented

For information, Kaido got his DF AFTER the battle of god valley, gifted to him by Charlotte Linlin

ch 70 Kaido's arrival

One Piece: I wield thunder and lightning

Anime & Comics · DaoistAutumn_rain

Nitrox2

3mth

Commented

I'm not gonna lie. I feel more like i'm reading journey of toji than the journey of zoro ... Zoro should be the one discovering curse energy, not the other way,him bestowing haki upon other, when he is 4...

ch 24 Chapter 24

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Anime & Comics · Fumiaki

Nitrox2

5mth

Posted

I don't like the quality of the translation. There is too many error in the first 2 chapter that i couldn't appreciate the novel. Perfect exemple of a machine translated novel edited by someone who doesn't have english as his primary langage. Ps : English isn't my primary langage...

Soul land : Rise of Family

Anime & Comics · Death_Knot

Nitrox2

5mth

Posted

HORRIBLE translation. I thought i was reading MTL without editing a single phrase. Completely unreadeable.

Douluo to become a god

Anime & Comics · THETRANANSLATOR

Nitrox2

6mth

Posted

This story is for the moment a 5/5. Need more update to know if it's a gem but I believe it has the potential. As long as the author has a direction, this story will go far.