damdidum

damdidum

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Just a regular everyday normal mothaf****r~

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damdidum
damdidum
4 months ago
Posted

MC is a pushover. its like he just wants to survive. secondly the books he started studying from have normal equations that university teaches and he doesn't know algorithms that most normal highschools students should know. All I'm saying is that the novel could have been better if the knowledge was discovered and used by MC on his own instead a girl who belittles MC at all times, has OCD, wants to use MC and has little to no respect for him is giving him books.

damdidum
damdidum
4 months ago
Posted

Mc is an idiot, he thanked someone for not slapping him after he fought a beast. Gave way too many spirit stones for no reason despite people bad mouthing him. Has all the resources that he could ever need but still joined the academy just because he is the MC. Moreover, he is just a pushover that allows anyone to barge into his hut. The bull fight had no meaning because the MC just wanted to look for the bull that killed him. It's like his death meant nothing because the MC still isn't wise enough to make use of his intelligence properly.

damdidum
damdidum
8 months ago
Commented

he is not a murder hobo, just a man in a childs body that saw his parents murdered and had the power to kill back

It isn't that I want to kill all of humanity but I wouldn't consider the grimm a bad thing. They scratch at humanities doors, sure, but a smaller population means less conflict between humans and a sort of unifying effect from a common enemy. Grimm aren't good but they have their benefits. Ones that remnant needs. If the grimm were gone what would the hunters do? They kill. It's their job. If there's no grimm to kill then what about humans?

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damdidum
damdidum
11 months ago
Posted

Cliche barrage.... It was so cringe that I got chills

damdidum
damdidum
1 years ago
Posted

Another stupid MC with young master syndrome.

damdidum
damdidum
1 years ago
Posted

Full of cringe and edginess. M.C is just 1 step away from being disliked and every plot regarding him seems forced. He has too much power but shitty execution and honestly, a lot more things that made me consider dropping this read. The cringe though. Its almost always on max.

damdidum
damdidum
1 years ago
Posted

I hope you don't nerf Haki in this because he has laws's body and could easily train himself in it. You could also just use Haki in a way to put spiritual pressure on people without going into soul reaper problems.I don't think you have really explored what people can do in one piece and what kind of special moves they have without devil fruits for combat.armament haki can be pretty devastating if used correctly even without weapon.

damdidum
damdidum
1 years ago
Posted

MC really wants to meet x men for no apparent reason. It doesn't matter if he has all the things he already has. It got annoying very quickly when the MC constantly reminds himself that he wants to meet them for no other reason just to have a fight/spar.Sadly the novel isn't that good despite gamer abilities and the dialogues seem to be a bit forced at this point.Furthermore I'm a straight guy, nothing wrong with gay people but I like peter parker straight.

damdidum
damdidum
1 years ago
Posted

Even though I know it's marvel but it feels like a completely different world.I'm not sure why but the original Author turned marvel into a cliche xianxia novel and somehow elevated china as well as completely fuck up magic and sorcery while at it and turned every marvel character into dumb side character.It even has the audience that comments on MC's every action.

damdidum
damdidum
1 years ago
Posted

Author seems to have forgotten about soul rings and how important it is to have a soul ring in soul land. MC is a depressed kid that often falls into crippling depression. (it makes me fall into depression tho) forced romance out of no where, illogical how aphrodisiac was in the kitchen and many other plot holes. I read too many times how the MC will find a way to grow strong but he spent months with a girl while planning nothing. Idk what's going on with this story but author you either need to stick 3rd pov or 1st pov, I can't read 3 paragraph with multiple povs and not feeling like burning a hole through my brain. I would recommend reading the novel thoroughly and then rewrite it. you need to know that the caravan conversation, forced romance and pregnancy and a protagonist who only thinks about being strong but does nothing other than spending time with a girl will lower your own fanfics worth. If you instead made him hard working hunter with amazing senses and a sense of responsibility it would have been completely different, he could have soul rings, have fighting experience and what not. I say all this because the idea of an archer is awesome when no one does it. you already differentiated from other but other plots ruined a lot of the story

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