Webnovel Author: Desivery - Fanfic Collection

I've had such a nice tine reading since I far. Little typos here and there, but everything else I think is fine. I recommend you using grammarly. There's also a chrome extension of grmmarly if you opt to use it. It will help you make less typos and grammar mistakes.

Man, we don't know who nathaniel dixon is. Should've put a location, position or even an office. It's so hard to understand what was going on at first. Still, i get it by the end but the start flew off my mind.

Oh man, don't mind us. Prioritize you family first. Putting your family first is something you should never apologize for. Anyhow, take your time and continue posting if you feel like you can, don't fotce it. Hope you and your family get back into shape soon man. Good luck! I'm sending my best wishes to you and your family.

I can see that. But here's the thing man, you don't need to explicitly tell us. You can just show it to us instead. Also, that also helps with building the excitement for us. Just a comment tho, not that it's bad. Just felt unnecessary.

Hi man. Honest comment, I kinda feel you make a lot of commentaries made by ricky about the future? I personally think that it's not necessary. I mean, I get how you want to share what Ricky aims to do and what he wants to hapoen, but I think you don't necessarily need to make a monologue for that to happen. Instead, you can embedd it into the story as the plot progresses. Instead of dumping it in one go, and I can feel that there's really no much progress on this chapter from the last chapter. Just a suggestion tho, 😊.

Hey man. Would just like to denote that you're doing good honestly. Just maintain the steady updates and you'll pick up votes eventually, as gold does shine. Just know that we're with you every step of the way.

Really nice chap. Thanks! The change was interesting.

Hi man! Really happy to hear that you'll be actively writing the story. Don't worry, just maintain stable updates and readers/commenters will further increase. Anywhow, I understand why you chose Paranormal Activity especially when Ricky is trying to rely all on his own (Like in monetary part) or probably so only he would be contributed in its success. Just wondering on what twist you could pull out of this. Also, the hollywood in your world background is kinda blurry as of now, hope you also point your focus unto it soon so we can grasp what will Ricky face and what can Ricky do. Thanks for the chap, man! It's good as always.

Hey man, I know you don't have the time to fully focus on this, but got to say that whenever I read an update it makes my day. Really excited about what's mote to come, especially as Ricky is going to be an adult soon! Ergo, gonna go acting and the schebang. Keep doing the good work! Don't pressure yourself much and just go with your flow.

Hi author! So glad that you're back. All the best is that you're safe and sound. Anyways, what a nice comeback of a chapter. Really keeping that nice but at the same time informative chapter heheg forward for more 🥺

Hi author! Looking forward to your daily updates next week. Just wanted to say that what you have written so far is good and super interesting. How witty the concept of Gamer in Hollywood. Hope you make some interesting scenarions in the near future. Kudos to you.

You aren't reading, and probably not familiar. There are certain subterfuge operations where military doesn't take any survivors. This was most frequent during wars before but in modern times it's not very common.

The past few chapters going to this was awesome. Really appreciated the build up.

To be honest, this rambling of a chapter was too subjective. Perhaps it tried to aim objectively as how it groups the people but nevertheless it stayed subjective still. Despite that, I still enjoyed it. Probably because it's pretty interesting to know how other people think, and probably that's what the Author was pondering about at the time. Readers who only read for "entertainment" doesn't mean that authors couldn't make something out of the box or quality content. They don't have to cater to you cause fanfiction authors aren't payed any penny. So, to those who called this boring(to many people), and useless(you're dumb), shame on you. Cause this chapter has obviously been under a lot of thought and it's a peek on the character's mindset and thought process. Which would lead you to know if you would like to proceed with the book or not. For me, I liked it and I would obviously read this. Thank you author, let me appreciate the efforts you did that others didn't appreciate.

Thank you for this wonderful story. Really had a great time reading it. Though the smexy times were a lil' bit too much in my opinion. Still, overall his was a great read and the goal and fluidity of the fic was admirable. Thank you for sharing this.