Surely that sounds like MJ’s pov. Lol
Liz was the epitome of the popular cheerleader, with her perfect brown hair cascading down her back, and her body was that of the ideal athlete, complete with large breasts that could easily envelop a big cock.
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
Author is into bigger proportioned behinds. Pretty sure the most common description of people so far was their “big ass”.
As I watched Jessica and Peter from a distance, frustration and jealousy gnawed at me. She had a tall, athletic build, undeniably sexy, with her most noticeable feature being her big ass—something even I couldn't help but linger on for a moment longer than I should've.
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
Didn’t he throw that one into a volcano? It’s been too long :D
- Joker - DC Comics (Off) ]
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
I don’t know, I feel like you did pretty well on the first chapters to rewrite it to your preference but the newer chapters feel just like AI.
The night was far from over, but with friends like Rose and Sirius by my side, I felt ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. The attack had tested our resolve, but it also strengthened our bond. Together, we would face whatever came next with determination and unity.
Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_
That explains it a bit. If you don’t do that already you could try out grammarly. From what I know many authors use that for spell- and grammar checking.
Thanks for the chapter. I’ve got a question tho. Are you using AI frequently? It feels like the story is blown out of proportions while repeating the same over and over again. Something about the journey, his exceptional growth and Brom silently evaluating him,…and again the same. Feels like I read the same thing over 10 times the last two chapters.
Earlier he said it’s Benfred. :D
Đoạn này đã bị xóa
Book&Literature · Bleap
This looked similar to martial arts on Earth. Even though he wasn't an expert, Yami still managed to see the similarities between Flowing Water and Earth martial arts. It looked like a mixture of different martial arts. From the techniques he had read so far, he noticed that some of the moves were similar to the techniques of Aikido and Jujitsu.
Anime & Comics · Calm_Storm
From my own experience in writing, people just like to criticise every little thing, especially on this platform smh. Most of the criticism is just personal opinion or some sort of power fantasy they want to live but aren’t up to write themselves. Most of the reception here seems positive from what I’ve seen and you are doing well. Even if it’s difficult, try not to give unreasonable voices too much room, it wouldn’t be your story and ruin what you planned.
No ideas, just a pat on the shoulder. I expected a relatively short story without much to write about. But his backstory and interactions were very nice to read that I get pretty absorbed in most of the chapters. His introspection and seeing the change he leaves behind at points is well done. It’s nice there’s some skilled writing between all those ai assisted stories and translations. I’d even prefer some bad but original writing compared to the aforementioned.
Share any thoughts or ideas you may have for the story, they really help, trust me.
A Song of Grace & Fury
Book&Literature · Bleap