Webnovel Author: Vongrak - Novel Collection

I'm a big fan of how the Horcux didn't so much merge with Lily as it did twist and pervert her thought process. On a technical level, nothing has changed. Her top priority is still Harry. However, with the new "perspective" the definition of "protect" has widened a lot and includes some questionable things

This is an amazing idea. Don't be afraid to keep doing stuff like this.

A couple of reasons. (Oh and spoilers) One is more obvious, Apep's best friend Jara is asexual. The second is because Kat and Lily are in a relationship and can actually go TOGETHER but count as '1 demon' for Apep's price range. Then there's the fact that, not that we know yet, Zurha the love interest was raised in an orphanage. Those are just some of the reasons Kat is a good choice for this.

The 8th of the 10 lives like right next to the orphanage. Like they share a wall with the orphage close. Lily and Kat are banking on fantasy tropes that say the random wealthy suitor has to in fact be the heir to the 8th of the 10.

No. Sue just has a lot of experience compared to the main cast so talking about stuff is fine. And she can enjoy more vanilla stuff... but when she has options... why not go for what you like?

Oh don't worry. Kat has ideas.

YES! Don't be a virgin Issei and complain. Instead be a Chad Issei where you mock him for poor technique

I suggest putting an (*) in the title. A nice little warning people can check if they actually care

Disagree. For some reason this highly amuses me

She'll manage it eventually.

mhm. Fair. I think it was nice to make her a more complex character this way. She has her reasons, even if they aren't good ones, and at the very least she wants to be a good mother, which is more than some parents can say.

mhm. Water is fine because it's just water but staining her stuff is a problem because that stuff costs money.

Kat would if she thought about it.

The upper limit is pretty high but this is technically a "teen" story. I could move it up an age bracket if I got in trouble but I don't really want to. It might give even more of the wrong impression then you could get having a Succubus as the main character

Yeah I had a similar expereince in school and felt it was appropriate to include like that... but I also know the English version of this site is technically based in the US and some people can be real touchy about that sort of thing.

Actually it's an even older reference to a Sips and Sjin minecraft lets play which I think used this as a reference to something else. Though I have seen DBZ abridged. My favourite use of it now is actually in "A Totally Legitamte Speedrun of Luigi's Mansion"