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What a waste of chapter, nothing but repetitive ranting

Before writing your next story you should really figure out the differences between pov styles and which knowledge a narrator can and cannot know. It will actually make a better story.

It's weird she is so against his way but doesn't actually do anything about it, which is basically accepting it.

It's called bad plot

You really need to tone down things you repeat, like the scratching head gesture.Nobody (me) likes reading things that are repeated.

How is it any good for Kara walking in her civilian clothes next to a known superhero?Also zero romance in this story but suddenly it's a date with someone he talked once before?

The most boring thing the internet has to offer: reaction contentThat's exactly what's happening in this chapter

I don't see the reason for her being shocked

Isn't the question kinda weak? I mean he should be a martial arts expert

But it is personal since it involves Cassandra

Here we are, forced plot

Boring as f

How would they even know she was involved at all

The cliche situations ... always the same

Chapter three and there's already a flashback ... I wonder why fanfic authors started to use this. It's sh*t. Have you ever seen a flashback in a professionally written book? Never like that

Well the back story is generic as f

What's with those sh*tty spoilers

What a waste of chapter. I didn't need the last spoiler

The manipulation is so bad yet forced plot makes it work.It's finally time to leave

Himera fought ok against Harry back then so I'm pretty disappointed she died so fast