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Hey man, please update this story regularly. When is the next chapter releasing........,......,........... ...........,.......,..........................................

It seriously keeps better and better.................... ,............. ................................ ......... ..... ....... ......... .....

Keep up the good work and updates. ................. .............. .......... ......... ....... .... .. ... ...............................................................................................

Is there a delay in the update for this Fanfic ?..…....?.................... ......................... ............, ........... ......... ....... ..... ... .. .

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee............................................................................................................. ..............

At the beginning the mc and atory was a bit inconsistent but as the story progresses there is huge improvement in character development, background. All in all a good fanfic , still a lot better than the once we have going now. And the most important thing is Author is consistent with the update that's a big plus.

Great............................................. ...... ................... ...............................,.........................................

Good Story, Keep up the regular updates........................................................................................................................... ...................................

Thanks for the chapter hope you update regularly. I re-read it again and story ,plot , character are very well written. Wanted to know how will you treat Naruto in this fanfic like his development or will mc help him out a little, because technically he is the cousin of the mc.

Is there romance in this