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Yeah, it's like reading a messy beginner's fanfic. Maybe for me the characters are too childish and the writing is too messy. Maybe because I've seen better system fanfics so if I see the bad ones I can already see them. Well, for me, this fanfic has no potential, it's just to fulfill the creator's wishes. Touch the grass bro!

Oh it turns out too many predictions are not good, I think at least the main canon for Bruce Wayne still applies to show that no matter how much preparation you make you can't escape fate and Bruce becomes a cooler Batman in my opinion with Tony Stark's memories. Yeah that's what I thought it turned out to be too good to be true!!

Good superman fanfic, but I feel like I've seen it on fanfiction.net or is it a coincidence? But keep up the enthusiasm for the update and don't slack off, at least 2 chapters a week, you'll definitely be able to do it.

Very uninteresting. Yes, that's the word that came to mind, I initially had the expectation that Mc would be born in Japan and train in martial arts, ninjutsu, and so on for several years and then go straight to America because his parents had work to do. At least the plot is more interesting if we don't follow the straight line of canon and create a more interesting background rather than bragging to someone else that he is someone who can see the future. Seriously you make stupid stories and boring slice of life. Yeah that's all!!

Ugh sorry dude, this Tony Stark isn't to my taste. At least I like the development of the technology and Mc doesn't waste his time. It's just that the problem with this fanfic is the romance (a planned and strange harem) and too many time skips. I stopped reading when Tony Stark met the Ancient One and he called her "wife" and was sure Tony loved her very much. Come on, seriously, bro, do you like bald women who are hundreds of years old?? Very unreasonable. That's all!!

Interesting fanfic!! Even though the MC has a rubbish system, in my opinion the story planning is very neat, and also please continue the hard work. Thank You!!

This is a pretty good Ghost Rider story in my opinion, the only drawback in this story is that the complexity of the system is not really explained here and the Marvel world where the MC is located is not very detailed and an example is after fighting a villain and suddenly the system wants to send him to another world, and the author did not explain the aftermath of the battle. Yeah, that's the downside in my opinion, please make the story a bit more complex and don't forget the aftermath. Thank You!

So far the story is still fun to follow and the writing and setting of the story are very good! I recommend it for those who want to read good Fate fanfic. Thank You!

I would not recommend this fanfic, because the story is so flat and there are no changes to Ishigami Yu and instead follows the original plot. Even having a system is a bit useless and actually ruins the story even more. Thank You!!

Huff, it turns out my expectations were excessive.i thought it would start from when Xiao Zhan was still young, but it turns out he already has 3 children. Then he didn't take care of his child well after getting Xiao Yan's chance and seemed to forget that he had children to take care of. It seems like the author is not a detailed person.

I really enjoyed this fanfic. Because I've been looking for an ATG novel that makes sense, and so far the story is interesting and not boring. Keep going and the spirit of the author !!

Sorry I can't give full stars, because there are some things that in my opinion are a bit under-explored such as the MC having a system. But so far the system rarely appears so it looks like it's useless and the MC's power growth is a bit lacking in details such as the amount of chakra or its attributes. That is all and thank you!!

My rating for this novel is very disappointing. For the first chapter, I really liked the character development, but why did MC suddenly meet the mother of the child who was attacked by bandits and destroyed everything? Are you trying to come up with a plot for his minions that I find so absurd. For renewal it's good but that's how the story starts to fall apart. Thank You!!

I didn't feel the presence of the MC at all. It's stupid to be in the early years of world war 2 and not change anything. Reading your novels is so frustrating that people are given a request by TOAA but instead refuse on the grounds to be more challenging, which is stupidity. Thanks for making my headache!

I'm not too interested in the MC being weakened by the plot you created. For looking stupid by having a powerful system, race, talent, and intelligence. That's why people prefer MCs who have romances that don't have to be forced according to the main story in the fanfic!!!

Spoiler Alert!! It is recommended to only read up to chapter 60, for the next chapter you can say it's trash. Because the author's logic has decreased so that the novel feels like a Chinese novel, the more you read each chapter you will get bored. Thank You!!

So far I'm okay with the current Batman story. It's just that the writer doesn't show the growth in Batman's strength which I think is just like that and also for the villains whose appearances are too fast not to be made per arc so that the development of Batman's sidekick character can be developed again. Please don't forget other superhero characters like Spiderman. That is all and thank you!

I can't give full stars, because the quality of your writing is very messy. which is when the author wants to provide information related to something I see it feels a bit confused to read it. And there is also the involvement of The Hands which is too hasty in my opinion. That is all and thank you!