Huy hiệu 13
Moments 2190
I was going to go with a few buddies but work called and offered me double pay for the weekend and I'm a sucker for punishment got to start my car fund some how lol
(Author's Note: Hey everyone! I'm putting an up to date picture of what Silvantus looks like in the chapter comments of this post. I'm posting this chapter early because I don't trust the auto post feature and I'll be gone this weekend on a trip to my first ever LARP event. Called the Reckoning, in London, Kentucky. I know it's a long shot, but if any of you are also there, I'll be going by the name Ashraf Azmi with the Suzak Mar Culture/Faction. I wish you all a wonderful Memorial Day weekend, for those who celebrate!)
Isekai From Hell: Modded Skyrim
Video Games · Lemon_Square
Ah ok so it's one of those fics....
"The kind that, a) wasn't meant to attack or hurt you in any way, and b the kind that you're supposed to answer without doing Shakespeare, Mom." Rex replied.
DxD: A World Where T*tties Defy Gravity
Anime & Comics · Orael
I get your point not gonna lie kinda bummed but eh what can I do I get that it's escapism but the "Child" Filter as I've come to call it is so prevalent in just about every single pokemon fic there is except the rather dark/murder hobo ones it was a breath of fresh air while it lasted it felt different didn't care much for master of tactics personally but the way this fic started was amazing good luck with your story I'll stick around for a bit to see how things turn out but can't lie the sudden shift to child filter Pokemon just kinda threw off a lot of the interest or care for the characters of the fic now there's no reason to get attached or care for them anymore their safe and their more or less guaranteed live's outside of maybe Giratina or something popping up it was fun while it lasted
Gloom is KO and the guy whose face I turned into meat-scraps... He's just KO too? ... Ah, right. I forgot. Humans became more durable and are stronger than animals now.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Ah yeah now I remember why I stopped reading this fic yeah nah theirs OP then theirs just too much and this crosses that line with ease
"It is called, semblance imitation, and it can copy and infinent amount of semblances." I widened my eyes in shock.
A Kitsune in remnant
Anime & Comics · Nether_Ark
Would love if that changed back personally Pokemon with life and death being more real was great that's my biggest/only (except Sun and Moon anime that was just horrible) gripe with Pokemon games and anime no real consequences or injuries just occasional flu/fever Ash being revived and time rewound or blasting off again for the 10000'th time
Gloom is KO and the guy whose face I turned into meat-scraps... He's just KO too? ... Ah, right. I forgot. Humans became more durable and are stronger than animals now.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Needs a comma , after black otherwise that aentence is a but of a momentary doubletake lol
"Now, We are unsure of an A ranker being on the border," Isabelle suddenly started the discussion. "The Elder Lily is on the front with Elder Leon joining us tomorrow. This means with Queen Mira, we will have three A rankers to attack the border. Regardless of Elder Leon making it on time, I believe that we attack. Queen Mira will merely need to stay in the background. We don't want to tilt our early hand with The Illusionists," Isabelle said, looking at me, "They have no battle slaves here yet. It seems that it has been confirmed. They brought the Battle slaves they had back to the city for some reason which we still haven't learned. Border City has been entirely black people go in but are not allowed back out."
Futanari System
Fantasy · Madjic
For the Dunmer people Mephala is considered one of the "Good" Daedra her Azura and Boethiah are considered the "Good" Daedra by the Dunmer
In fact, a good number the Dunmer were outright hopeful, many of them having family in the Grey Quarter saw this as a golden opportunity to move them away from the Nords' hatred and into a far safer place, some of the bolder twats in the ranks even started whispering about me being a living saint of the displaced.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
Of course theres a One Punch Reference between it and JoJo constantly eroding decent memes and constant the overuse why did I ever expect anything else....
It didn't take long for her to realize who the offender was, as Zyleth was standing directly in front her, his fist outstretched towards said mountain.
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Horribly the whole seperation arc stupidity as a child is just and then hand waving away how anCHOLD soldnand bought stocks is just not worth reading you've ruined your own fic by forcing stupid ideas right out the gate for a horendouslly rough start honestly this fic had ootential but you skip and force too much not worth while to read anymore get more clear and thought out storylines from mobile game adds than the current stiry you've written
Make sure to tell me how the pace of the story is going. Also, keep recommending me more movies or series. Don't forget to read the weird quote of the day in the author's thought.}
Victoria Alexandra Alexia ~ The Multiverse Traveler
Movies · groomable
Yeah think I'm gonna stop reading this fic here Ash's personality just I dunno it get's worse and worse as the fic goes in and he just cimes off as a rude pr*ck rather than anything else at first it was ok sure he was needlessly arrogant and constantly just borish rather than anything but now it's just olain areogance ignorance and rudness lost any and all joy or interest I felt at the start if the fic and the mutliple POV swapping constantly is obnoxious as f*ck like I get you want to the world to feel fleshed out but with so much going on and Ash's personality devolving into utter trash over the past 50-60~ish chapters this fic is just dropping dramatically in quality and interest
ch 163 "We have a Project to finish"
Pokemon: Radical Redux
Anime & Comics · Katsu39
No just this Ash is unreasonably arrogant rude and forceful just overall meh as a MC he's too prideful and ignorant to accept training tips from a former Champion
Professor Oak sighed and sat down on his computer to do some unplanned work, also looking at the notebook he offered Both Gary and Ash, "Are my training techniques that unpopular?"
Pokemon: Radical Redux
Anime & Comics · Katsu39
Personally I would advise you to stop go back and rewrite this fic honestly so far the writing has been forced AF and just feels sloppy genuinely interested in the premise of this fic but the execution is 2/5 at best
I would also like a comment about who the secretary should be.
Victoria Alexandra Alexia ~ The Multiverse Traveler
Movies · groomable
Yeah no problem magically making money yay.... man the planning fir this fic is so sloppy and forced like non of this feels organic or thought out just quick ideas to BS the MC's way to relevamce and a leadership position
During the 1960s, it was quite easy to get an identity if you had money, which I did. After that, I opened an account for the stock market with the help of Katie, who transformed into a gentleman who was also my guardian on paper. I use the short-sell option, which means that when the Dow Jones Industrial Average and S&P 500 drop, I earn. I invested 5000 USD with 50 times the leverage on each of them. I knew they would drop because I had some help from Katie in accessing the 21st century internet. [A/N: I know some things about leveraging might be wrong, but it was the 1960s; who knows how much leverage someone could get?]
Victoria Alexandra Alexia ~ The Multiverse Traveler
Movies · groomable
Horrible idea but sure why not gotta figure out some way to explain abandoning family for 10 years
Yes, kidnapping. I've watched a lot of movies and TV shows in my previous life. So, I thought, why not make it seem like I was kidnapped? After my group has risen to power, Make it seem like this was the group who kidnapped me due to my intellect and powerful body, and I killed the leader and took the leader's place. This would explain my disappearance, and I would be able to solely focus on the company instead of dealing with sewing, marriages, and hiding my identity.
Victoria Alexandra Alexia ~ The Multiverse Traveler
Movies · groomable
Honestly my only negative's with this fic is the lack of power the MC has and the constant railroading but otherwise awesome fic hope at least one if the 2 change sooner than later it is getting a bit boring reading the MC constantly getting put into a bad situation just 1 after the other can't lie it's starting to feel repetitive especially since the pacing is somewhat slow think I might put this fic on hold for a bit and let 10-20 chapters stockpile outside if all that the fic is good great premise good ideas just feel like the MC is greatly lacking compared to the world around her with all the mentioned things let's be honest her surviving the ambush was complete plot armor and forced she was completely and utterly outclassed and if she didn't get lucky she would have been the one likely dead she just feels so meh even her maid whose hardly relevant recently is more interesting at the moment than her
I guess I don't… so I'll leave that for a Knight to worry about and head back to my dorm. My exams are over and I should do my best tomorrow.
The Villainess Returns with a System
Fantasy · El_Don