Webnovel Author: PrinceDarkness - Fanfic Collection

Congratulations on being able to write to the end and please keep up the good work

In the end it was largely because of this that it was somewhat of an obligation for us readers to continue reading as well as for you the author to continue writing, although I'm happy to have managed to finish reading this incredible story of yours and now I'm off to read your next one I can't wait to see your new work

author, his story and writing are incredible, however the fatal flaw in his novel made him lose a lot of the final quality of the novel. Ex the only constant thing in the protagonist's life was total focus on just basketball and there was no development of the story in other aspects of the protagonist's life he had no desires or hobbies there were no likes or dislikes, no unexpected developments eg: the protagonist's brother trying to kill him with the brotherhood being just an act, however there was just basketball and following the story and defeating Kuroko's squad in basketball, not that this is ruin but it is that in the end there was no development of the backstory as well as the protagonist's daily life, etc.

Great chapter

author another idea is why not use the first spiritual ability to strengthen the second spiritual ability as well as your element control and even use the first ability to strengthen the elements and techniques

author you could develop the martial spirit as if it were a soul guide, thus allowing him to obtain armor, sword and much more, perhaps even using the book itself as armor in a way that imitates gravity since this could not only improve his training physical plus could also use gravity like a black hole to attract spiritual energy greatly increasing training, this would even help his second soul skill

Thanks for the chapter

Ótimo capítulo, e a propósito acredito que as palavras do Lucian no capitulo 24" meu pequeno coração negro" é uma referência ou dica do coração do monarca das sombras

Claro eu não espero que seja agora , pois do contrário vai estragar a história e tornar o enredo chato, o que eu espero é que o autor crie uma forma do protagonista alcançar o coração negro conforme a história progride

Também gostaria de saber se o protagonista vai condensar o seu coração no coração negro do monarca das sombras de forma que permite que ele transceda a mortalidade obtendo mana ilimitado/ vida eterna e as inúmeras outras habilidades do monarca

Eu mal posso esperar pelo próximo

Ótimo capítulo

thanks for the chapter

Fico feliz que o autor voltou a escrever essa fic, quando o autor tinha parado de escrever no capítulo 55 eu tinha ficado decepcionado mais mantive a expectativa de que um dia o autor iria continuar essa fanfic , e minha expectativa não foi traída quando fui procurar na biblioteca alguma história para ler achei a notificação do novo capítulo 😎

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