besides being a forced situation and that they over explain everything, it makes no sense that they have confidence and explain why they are doing with the plan, at most they could ask for explanations about the blind spots without giving the motivations of the owners of the design in their dialogues, just by showing them interested in pointing out the blind spots explains their motivation without it seems that you are trying to explain things as if we were brainless.
"Can you show us the blind spots you mentioned earlier and how an intruder would maneuver his way into the building, successfully escaping the sight of both the security guards and cameras. So we could fill in the gaps and turn that building into an impenetrable one just like we were paid to do."
Anime & Comics · Maverick_DaSupreme
I never thought I was going to see such a child's show-like release of information in a ff.
"Oh, retrograde amnesia. Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't that a type of amnesia where the chances of a patient recovering their memories are very slim and almost never regain their previous memories?" He apprehensively asked the concerned doctor.
Anime & Comics · Maverick_DaSupreme
Cats have not yet appeared at this time, for now there were rat breeders, remember that cats were placed after the cheese and blood incident.
" I do not like your order, Maester; in fact, I hate it with all my being…I shall not be offended by one of you grey rats. Please bear in mind that the next time you insult me, it will be a rat, and I know the Red Keep houses many cats." Ragnar said as he turned around to face Prince Daemon, who still had a smile on his face. Ragnar glared at him, but the Prince kept the amused smile on
TV · Caio_Bernardo
Take care, I'm going to give you a review for chapter 25 or 30. I don't like to give quick reviews, for now I really like your work, keep it up. It is worth noting that I would like to see more of the world outside of the simulations (which I guess you are going to do since you put the limitation of the mental condition).
I have subverted your expectation now haven't I?
Anime & Comics · WebnovelLife
it, Remember that English does not handle genders in things.
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Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
Very good chapter, Renzo I think he is making a mistake, it is understandable that he will go alone, at the end of the day he gave his life, but leading an Elite Brigade and one of the pillars like Irelia is already overdoing it, I quite understand Leader and Zed, out of nowhere one of your pillars leaves by will and also convinces another pillar to leave, that is an unawareness of the importance that he has and irelia has in the resistance, in addition to not paying attention to the enemies What is he doing, with what he said he won Zed as an enemy and the funniest thing is that he knows how powerful he will become and that precisely a murderer with mobility is his counter, if he only said that he needs a time out for psychological reasons and that he would seek more allies by orders of Lady Janna, this would make Zed not take him as a traitor and would leave the doors open for him to return and help a little. I'm not saying that this mistake bothers me, but I like that MCs have mistakes since they are human and although this move made him win over an enemy and negatively affect the Resistance, we also saw our MC follow his heart and mind. in addition to finally thinking of himself for the first time of what is about Fan fic
ch 20 Departure.
Video Games · Xerstoren
What I mean is that using this plot in the first chapters would cause a very large impact in the world, so much that the rest of the plots will be affected, since Wonder Woman will be chasing the head of the protagonist as the warrior who is and everything that. Never show my rejection of this plot I only hope that your adaptation and planning will be good because this will strongly affect the world of DC, by the disappearance of one of the world's largest forces and the one in charge of the Defense of the planet against the gods. Since the plot started with the Gotham purge, which personally seems the best, since in the eyes of the public it will be seen as a hero that eliminated the villains and will not come back to torment them, very different if their first action is a Genocide of an entire group The heroes would like it like a madman at the level of Ras Alahul or Vandal Savage.
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Movies · Edgelord666
She would be an antiheroe, in general terms her goal is morally good but her methods are extreme, so much that you antagonize the heroes and normal people.
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Movies · Edgelord666
The theme of this option will be that it is going to be antagonized very quickly to the League of Justice, I do not know what plans you have with them or that you are looking to do with this group but this causes the whole league of justice this of the main character , even Wonnder Woman would come to hate MC. if this option was chosen I hope that the consequence is verified
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Movies · Edgelord666
When I have to give a spear in favor, I will give it, one of the recruits finally makes sense
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Anime & Comics · JokerHighJack
+1
No harem.
Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger
Anime & Comics · _oinkchan