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Okay so this is totally off topic, but SUPER IMPORTANT. TOILET PAPAPER! Do you know what they used before toilet paper, ewwww. If you’re lucky, leafs and sticks. But in Europe, they Shared some type of leather belt butt cleaner. THEY SHARED it! Crazy!

OMG!!! A Logo!!! An easy way to nationalize people. Creating a logo. Create a monument/ statue logo outside of school, outside city hall. Everywhere, clothes logo. Concrete streets logo, on the road. Logos on the buildings. A logo everywhere. Uhm flags too. Paintings. Jewelry logo, military uniforms logos.

He is still young, in this early 20s. He needs more power to protect himself

I love reading these types of chapters, I enjoy the different p.o.v of civilian life. I also hope you can deeply explain the seriousness of punishing a noble. I know you’ve address that the mc has tried but failed to seriously punish a noble before (just succeeded in executing a few if I remember) but you should emphasize a “chill”, “mad look”, “goosebumps” and etc. every time the mc brings up the idea of punishing the nobles. Perhaps the mc can emphasize the feeling that if he really punishes these nobles, he’ll be assassinated. “Poison” gave over. Also with the schools running. The mc should really begin the nationalize his people, adresss his church teaching about good and bad and etc.

I love these types of chapters!

Ahh, i want 2,000 more chapters

Dude, honestly. Mc should get rid of the nobility. They are to much trouble. I’d not him but his descendants. Honestly, just follow the British. Constitutional Monarchy. Well after he has absolute power I mean. He still has to take away the power of the nobility at least or get rid of it all together

That was scary, always being watched

When this arc is over, I want to see family life. He already failed as a father. Ops wrong book. I mean it’ll suck if he fails as a father. Imagine if his daughter became a prostitute. To scary

I got chills hear they are cutting body parts. No wonder they used to be called “quack doctors”.

Ahh finally a good Ship for Rin. I love it!

This gave me chills. But yeah, he should have taken Alexander’s offer.

Ah, what happened to the immigration?

I love see the different P.o.vs of the migrants. Oh a little bit more on the fiancé’s situation

Best CHAPTEr!!! More! More! More!

Mc should invent “time” super important

I love this novel, but I EXTREMELY want to see different P.O.V. The daily life of his citizens. How they describe the new city. Not just 1 or 2 chapters. But maybe 10-20 chapters, perhaps a mini arc about his adventures throughout the city and their daily life. The current chapter describes the city’s progress/ changes is like “ we have this shop selling this. This is the market area”. Can’t you add “ flowery words” while describing the city. I just can’t picture how the current city looks like. What’s their reaction towards Goddess Gia. How does it effect their daily lives. Their teachings. Oh maybe the P.O.V can start as a peasant, merchant, etc from a different city. A few chapters describing the crimes, customs, stench, beliefs about their city. And perhaps his Culture Shock when he leaves and goes to the MC’s city.