Just try not to leave this one for what you like more or shorten it, this one promises to last until sinnoh or kalos please don't take this one away from us, like when you restarted the naruto fic (restarting it made no difference it felt the same although it improved in the grammar aspect felt the same), please don't go to get more attached to that one and abandon this one I already love autin as mc so that you can later remove it
ch 480 Chapter no.468 Psychic Therapy
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
Aren't you going to create them out of nothing? It's just fear because of the comment that said sorry
ch 35 Rats Bloodbath
Book&Literature · CreedFollower
Team No-more heroes
ch 13 13: The Strongest Team
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
Team titan slash
ch 13 13: The Strongest Team
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
Team cross slayer
ch 13 13: The Strongest Team
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
Black radiant
ch 13 13: The Strongest Team
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
I don't want to sound critical but problems equal a good plot or an acceptable arc, removing them early equals plain and bland wish fulfillment.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Destruction of The Blind Eye Society and Gideon (2)
Anime & Comics · Herohero
Very empty, give too much power to a protagonist and you generate hatred, plus the fact that he does not need a power up for now with everything he has, if he trains him he could defeat thragg and the novel would end shortly after, I know the author said it is nfws with a plot but it develops it too well for me to drop it because we asked for more nfws
ch 11 11: Existentialism
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
Pretty good but I think it was too short and you could have given Debbie more prominence in this chapter as a point of view when her husband confesses everything or some cameo hero as black samson
ch 12 12: The Truth of Viltrum
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
Personally, I think it's better to give it to Amber or get it herself because the suit gave an ordinary human the strength equal to Mark's, imagine giving that to a vultrumite with speed strength, too rotobromoe the plot, although it would be great if he could mess with that story, I seriously don't like the protagonist, he reminds me of Peter from the guardians of the galaxy, hateful, crybaby and very immature (even cross it out, Starlord was better than him, for God's sake)
ch 11 11: Existentialism
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
You could use the villains that I know are shown in the comics, not all of them are great villains but there is mention of some that you can use from time to time to fill in, there are also the spin off comics of invincible that can help further expand the universe of this same , or use drama, the rex and eve thing can be used to complete a mini arc and make it a good arc
ch 11 11: Existentialism
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
It is obvious that Orochinaru took the most dangerous jutsus while with a genjutsu he deceived the village, it could also be Danzo trying to destroy forbidden power or take it away or Itachi trying to create a more peaceful Konoha
ch 76 Chapter no.76 Mystery of the Forbidden Scroll of Seals
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
I have a doubt, Padme and Annie got married but what happened to the protagonist in all this wedding? Will you leave it like that? Because apparently Annie loves the protagonist and Padme will have his son.
ch 79 Under the Radar
Movies · CambrianBeckett
Thanks for chapter
ch 480 Chapter no.468 Psychic Therapy
Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet