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LamenThief
male LV 4Just trying to improve my writing and eng. Discord group for my novels: https://discord.gg/zXz6Hj3RSq
2020-02-13 đã tham gia BrazilHuy hiệu 7
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the captain obvious is literally the perfect reader for any writer on WB, you can see that based on how any writer reacts to his comments. He always has something nice to say even when it's negative criticism about things that could be improved. he is polite and funny. you, on the other hand... I'm poor, but I would give the little money I have to never see a comment from you on my novel again because you are annoying af
"I'm only going to say this once," Arthur speaks in a serious tone and puts his thumb on the guy's eye. "If you look at her again, I'm going to rip it out and stick it in a place you won't like at all..."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
Don't blame me for your mind problems. and if you find the novel gross, wtf are you doing still here?
Yet, Nyx becomes concerned and exclaims in his mind. "Baka! What are you doing???"
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Fantasy · LamenThief
Latin. and has meaning
"Deus Ignis, da mihi potentiam solis ardenti…"
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Fantasy · LamenThief
yep, you can leave now. and you don't need to judge bad something that doesn't hurt anyone, that's just toxic
When saying that, Draven can't help but feel bad for not having Aria's love for so many years. He had to look for other women in the village to satisfy his needs and it only made him lose any chance of having Aria again, even though he still isn't willing to give up.
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Fantasy · LamenThief
Am I saying it or is some character saying it? when a reader doesn't know the difference between the author's opinion and that of a character about other fictional characters... yeah, it's called "dumb," but I tried using "bad reader" not to offend too much
Before Aria gets emotional again, she focuses on the problem at hand. "Alright, we only have a week to work, so you need to prepare yourself. We already have the advantage of knowing when the enemy is coming thanks to the runes I placed on the road, and you know the region as well, so you can focus on getting stronger."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
kill someone they don't know and don't know if it's their enemy? I was making MC go down a path like that, but it seems pretty irrational and not interesting to be honest, glad my good readers don't think like you so they gave me a good feedback about it in the most recent chapters
Before Aria gets emotional again, she focuses on the problem at hand. "Alright, we only have a week to work, so you need to prepare yourself. We already have the advantage of knowing when the enemy is coming thanks to the runes I placed on the road, and you know the region as well, so you can focus on getting stronger."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
Why would they hide from their family in their own kingdom where everyone could recognize them? that's a NO, man
"How did you end up like this, Draven?" the woman asks. "You look nothing like the man you once were…;" 'Perhaps there's nothing left of him inside,' "None of the man I admired above all… nothing left of my brave and kind big brother."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
Also, your other replies were censored by WN and I don't know what they were about. well, you look like someone who can't even reply anything decently to defend toxic people who only complain. Do you understand how not having someone like that as a reader is so much better for me? Why can't I want to have good readers and avoid the bad ones?
"I love her so much..."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
Criticism has to make sense, otherwise it's just a meaningless complaint. This guy and others complain about how the characters are, and this one is still quite ambiguous, in these cases, the problem is not my bad English or my way of explaining things, they simply don't like the content, so why continue reading? If you read all the comments, you'll see how I welcome constructive criticism (which is usually about something bad)
"I love her so much..."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
good question, you may find out if you keep reading
And even though they don't share the same ideas and not even the same bed, Arthur always saw his parents as a very united couple. At least they never fought in front of him or anything like that.
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Fantasy · LamenThief
actually it's the old girl and she's been mentioned before. thanks for reading!
ch 123 That Dress
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Fantasy · LamenThief
good points
ch 128 Roof Talk
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Fantasy · LamenThief
I could explain to you about reincarnation and how he was created as a new person, etc... but you're not worth my time. pls, just drop, if this novel is not for you, don't read, it's simple, right? Can you understand this simple thing?
"You have to act now while they're confident," she says in his mind. "They're drunk, so if you're quick, you can save the girl from any harm..."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
When you are 14 or younger, most girls of the same age cannot compete with girls of 16/18, this is a fact based on the average, but of course, there are always exceptions
"She is already nineteen, so I don't like to imagine you two together..." Aria speaks honestly, showing her worry. "But I guess it's normal for boys to be interested in older girls, so it's okay."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
I will write it again, I just need time to settle things up
ch 773 Proud and Mysterious Ladies
Lust Knight
Fantasy · LamenThief
okay... just remember that not everyone is perfect
Aria very much wants to make Arthur feel good, so she places a tender kiss on his forehead. "Your father may not agree with who you are, but Mommy loves you very much as you are, perfect like this."
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Fantasy · LamenThief
not dropped, the releases may get normal this month
thank you so much, friend!
ch 124 One Step in Paradise
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Fantasy · LamenThief
most of the readers who complain want the characters to be made of perfections while I believe they are more defined by imperfections. But at the end of the day, I'm a poor guy, so all I care about is that the novel has readers willing to unlock the chapters with coins so I don't starve without any money xD
"You did well, my son," Draven calls Arthur his son again. "You can't let any man speak like that about your mother, even if she's wrong."
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Fantasy · LamenThief