Great chapter, but this was his first major battle in the story, so having him win by luck after practically giving up when things didn’t go exactly as he expected doesn’t sit well with me. He could have at least tried to go down fighting, using a basic attack to try and end the fight before he was killed and lost the experience.
ch 12 Midnight Phantom
Games · MiuNovels
Great start so far. I like that your character isn’t human. Most of these game type novels all introduce the different race option but they always choose a human protagonist making the option pointless. You should be carful when using abbreviations in the middle of sentence though, they should be reserved for the stat sheet or only used occasionally to keep from repeating words. Oh and In gaming terms ATP stands for attack points not attribute points. It’s used to calculate the players hit score and their damage dealt over time.
ch 0 6 First Blood
Games · MiuNovels
I love that movie. Ants was so much better than A Bugs Life, but nobody seems to remember it.
ch 799 The Creed
Fantasy · RinoZ
Sounds about right
ch 703 Rhymes With Drops
Fantasy · RinoZ
ch 248 Stigweard Gragg's Legacy
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
It wasn’t Askel that put the hit on his parents in the draft it was Dolion. And Quinn doesn’t really need to get payback on these people, since they haven’t done anything to him.
ch 199 The Italian Climax
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapter!!! Also exp 😅
ch 0 1 Chapter 15 : A Name For Himself
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
Im definitely loving it 👍👍👍
ch 0 1 Chapter 8 : Electric Apocalypse
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
Thanks for the chapter… also exp…
ch 0 1 Chapter 8 : Electric Apocalypse
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
Adorable but random choice of pet. Unless your just referencing Karoo
ch 20 The Littlest duckling
Fantasy · BoltingPigeon
It’s always fun to see how different writers tackle vampires and I have to say I love how your doin it!
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Eating Problems
Urban · Miraculous Hamburger
Yeah I did, they were both pretty epic
ch 78 Chapter 78 : Suicide Squad
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
This was an awesome chapter 🔥🔥🔥
ch 78 Chapter 78 : Suicide Squad
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
That’s awesome and thanks for the chapter
ch 70 Chapter 70 : Baby Duri
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
ch 51 51 Cutting heads and saving Lagertha
Anime & Comics · Bjorntjuh96
When ever I see a guy react like Duri did when he saw Seven I always think of this scene with Jim Carey from The Mask
ch 66 Chapter 66 : Hell’s Party
Fantasy · JOSH_ONE
The MC in this story is weird. He eats bugs and walks around every wear barefoot. I do love the powers he has tho. Obviously alot of thought went into this which is always nice 2 see. I do think the summary could to be buffd up abit becuz this story is seriously good and I feel it doesn’t do it proper justic. But maybe that’s just me 🤷♂️
One Piece: The Rising Tide
Anime & Comics · Professor_Zzyzx