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she*
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'She* said...' '...she* wants to...'
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"...a stroke."*
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This is something that just felt off but you should put - at the end of skin just to have it look 'completed'. Great chapter though!
Awakenings- Mortal: Blood, Bone marrow, Internal organs, Reproductive system, Skin
RWBY: Dragon's Heart
Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
You need to rework this entire paragraph to have female pronouns.
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right*
As she looked into his eyes, all she saw was someone that was already dead, devoid of any hope to live. Without any further words, she made blood gauntlets on her righ hand, and plunged two of the clawed fingers into his skull, causing bits of his brains and blood to come out of it.
MHA: The Fresh Blood
Anime & Comics · The_Fae_Child
OD*
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...an* outpost...
"I've found and outpost belonging to one of them by interrogating one of their Clansmen. Now, since their is a decent amount of them, I'm planning on gatheirng all four of us to deal with them." Jörmungandr explained.
Naruto: The Sorcerer Supreme
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
"*Can I..."
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"*Imagine that..."
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her*
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Knight*
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'*In case...'
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"*Oh, right..."
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"*No kidding,"
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"*Pretending to..."
Pretending to be nonchalant is getting harder and harder," Samus complained to herself, feeling as if the soap operas had lied to her.
Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
This entire paragraph needs to be redone with S/she* instead of H/he.
Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse