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Completely understandable. That's why I'm currently in the process of rewriting it all from scratch, then replacing everything at once. Look forward to it, as there won't be any of the issues you have aptly pointed out. Thank you for your input, I value honesty and criticism as it helps me identify problems.
I'm glad! I hope to read your comments and thoughts when I post the new version.
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in progress :)
Nah, I just had one last chapter saved that needed posting. I'm fully focused on rewriting now.
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I haven't decided yet. I initially wanted to replace the chapters, but I might make it an entirely different novel.
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Those are all amazing ideas, thank you!
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I really appreciate it!
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Well I would love your opinion, my idea for the change was this (Makes a pact with Spirit Dragons (that look like chinese dragons) after Arthur Pendragon did them a favour which saved them from great peril. They have no physical form. From there, every Pendragon goes to that sacred place, and makes a pact with A dragon spirit, capable of harnessing their powers after going through several trials, each one unlocking more powers) your idea is great as well, what do you think needs changing, what could I incorporate?
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I'm ashamed to admit I hadn't thought about that. We can cover both, it could be interesting to see how both sides affect each other in close proximity.
Jenna tapped her pen against her notebook. "I'm planning to chart our journey there, you know. From the ruins in Cairo to the monasteries in the Himalayas. We could learn so much about how different cultures shape their magical practices."
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No, i really want to limit his legacies. He probably won't get any more honestly.
The video shifted to a narrative clip. [After this defeat, he vanished into the wilderness. When he returned, his Noivern had transformed, now marked by unmatched savagery and formidable strength.]
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nah, just been busy, i'll drop a chapter soon!
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no, just been very busy, I'll write one very soon!
more like a computer analysing the data, and coming up with ways to prevent it from ever happening again sort of thing.
Everyone was shocked, his learning ability was immense. You can only do the same attack once before it learns a counter. As Godzilla was fighting, he was downloading recorded battles on the internet and analysing them for strategies. It would then cross-reference them with the current battle to create the most optimal approach.
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Hopefully
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I read all your paragraph comments, glad you could enjoy it :)
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Just finishing off my assessments for uni, I'll get right on the next chapter! Ty for your patience.
"And there we have it folks, the first win of the battle goes to Rex and his Scizor. That is not to say Pikachu did not perform exceptionally, after all, this is the most damage Scizor has ever take." James said passionately.
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