Webnovel Author: Anonny_Anonymous - Novel Collection

Making the MC feminine-looking and appearing like a 5 year old at 8 years old is a very annoying thing to do to your MC.

I don’t think she could hear Kurama without visiting the seal because the seal was too tight. She’s a sealmaster. No way would she put up with his taunts.

“7. Genderbent Orochi-Mama (You either expand her Ryuchi Domain or not. It's your choice.) 8. Maybe humanoid Kurama?” Pure cancer.

He should have just accepted the jutsus. Even if wind isn’t your primary chakra nature, you can still learn it.

Anybody who uses the term “waifu” out loud is incredibly cringe.

She didn’t reinvent herself. She had super poppy songs well before that.

Trashy nerfed system. Disappointing.

This is a stupid AU change.

He’s dumb to sell them all. I could see selling one or two, but there’s really no need to sell them all. The Targaryens likely have money in the Iron Bank as well.

Very true.

Very cringe. Paying 5,000 for something he can get for free? He could simply apply for a social security number and make up a story of being raised in the wilderness by a cult.

Why wouldn’t he consume the entire thing?

This method of reincarnation is incredibly annoying.

Multiple reincarnators? He has to face someone else that was chosen as a champion? Pure cancer.

Kaguya had a physical body to be sealed in the moon How could Hagoromo be sealed in another moon without a physical body? Or did I miss his resurrection in a previous chapter? I thought he was just a soul interacting with the world. If so, he’d just phase right through the moon.

This resurrection soul jutsu would never be used by Hagoromo. I don’t like that you added it to the fic.

Don’t get involved with her. She’s crazy. She used to drink her brother’s blood and make out with her brother.

Very contrived ending.

Multiple reincarnators in the same fic? Awful.

I’ve never heard of a walker that survives a headshot with a gun, even if it’s freshly turned.