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It might be a good idea to do that, but I don't know. What's really important is that you write the story you want to write. Also, I wanted to compliment your editing and grammar for your chapters. You're doing a phenomenal job!
ch 0 5 Preparations for the Assault
Reincarnated with a Private Military System
Fantasy · Faux1231
I'm sorry to say this, but it's not enough for this story to work for me. The price to summon soldiers is way too cheap, and besides, he can simply sell his weapons to people in this fantasy world, give weapons to people he trains in this fantasy world, and whatever else I can't currently think of. I mean heck, what's to say he can't just summon a nuke and set it to explode? There just isn't enough tension on whether the MC will succeed or fail. Moreover, I like the story, so that's why I'm complaining. I just want you to have a highly successful webnovel.
ch 0 5 Preparations for the Assault
Reincarnated with a Private Military System
Fantasy · Faux1231
Sounds like your friend should have appealed to the professor's dean of their department and got them in trouble and an apology for that absurd BS. That would not fly at any of the schools I went to or worked at here in the US.
Michael shook his head. "No, I have to get there mom. They have this strict policy in major exams."
Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
I'm greatly enjoying the book so far, but I absolutely do not like how the MC can just summon almost whatever equipment he wants without cost. Whether by the use of Souls or some other currency, material, or gacha reward, there should be something limiting his spending or else his system makes this way too easy to live in this world.
ch 0 5 Preparations for the Assault
Reincarnated with a Private Military System
Fantasy · Faux1231
The imagery on the banknotes and the material they're made out of could make them worth at least a few copper coins when selling them as "art" to the common person.
He found a few piles of banknotes which were of no use.
The Necromancer is amassing troops like crazy in the apocalypse
Games · Angry Piranha
He probably needs to purchase a skill book to learn how to do that.
He used the 'Bone Manipulation Skill' to transform the three bodies into skeletons, then continued directing the skeleton warriors to move downstairs.
The Necromancer is amassing troops like crazy in the apocalypse
Games · Angry Piranha
-Automaton production factory unlocked
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy · Chronicle27
Fang Hao took it. It felt silky smooth right away.
Global Lords: Hundredfold Increments Starting With the Undead
Games · Angry Piranha
He had noticed that they ran into another group of hobgoblins mixed with goblins. But while they were engaged in a fight, an even bigger variant than the hobgoblin appeared. It was at the same height as the steel sentry, its physique was insane, as if it was made out of only muscles. It charged at the sentries and bisected them from the torso with a large axe.
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy · Chronicle27
"We basically work as a sort of hivemind now, huh?" said the steel Automaton to the original him.
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy · Chronicle27
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Automaton production factory
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy · Chronicle27
-Automaton production factory unlocked
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy · Chronicle27
"Yo yo yo! Relax, buff Shrek!" he said, his martial arts training instinctively kicking in as he raised his arms for defense.
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy · Chronicle27
I'll do what I can with giving you some useful feedback when I read more chapters, but thank you for the kind words. I try to be as kind and empathetic as I can.
But not today! Today, I am adamant about pushing myself to the limit! Consequences be damned!
Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans
Fantasy · Sir_WendoS
The twists are coming from everywhere. lol
I looked behind me, only to see that the girl was no longer where she was a second ago, but almost a metre right near to me! And with her nails looking terrifyingly dangerous!
Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans
Fantasy · Sir_WendoS
I came to a quick realisation that I was wrong. My heart… it gave out an irregular and loud beat. An unfamiliar feeling took over me, as I found my surroundings blurring and heard the air getting sharper.
Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans
Fantasy · Sir_WendoS
I couldn't stay near the cell any longer, for it might induce nightmares later. I didn't want that.
Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans
Fantasy · Sir_WendoS
That is if I don't die after leaving my cell!
Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans
Fantasy · Sir_WendoS
My eyes dart around the cave, searching for anything even remotely edible. They land on a cluster of mushrooms sprouting near the wall. Hardly a gourmet meal but I'm past caring! I scramble over and start ripping them from the rocky soil, not even bothering to brush off the dirt before stuffing them into my mouth!
Isekai: I, a powerlifter, awakened in a world of titans
Fantasy · Sir_WendoS
ch 344 Chapter 338, City Lord's Dream_1
Global Lords: Hundredfold Increments Starting With the Undead
Games · Angry Piranha