Excellent writing. Rich in nuances of language. At 6 chapters per month. That's 1.5 chapters per week. Likes the appropriation of the environment. From a family setting to a shared room. With common spaces: with interventions typical of two great friends. One is passionate, jovial, helpful, while long-suffering, amorous, playful. The other is serious. Scheduled. Deliberate bias in your shared space. Simulate good coexistence. Respect for women.
Enchantment and disenchantment. The pass of doing and letting do. Of respect and imposition. Of the portent of man and the right to coexist.
It is good writing: with a jovial description, in contrast to the real settings. It's perfect, for so much activity to write significant updates. Drive well: both worlds. He, of the "contemporary" protagonist and that of the "monarchist" game itself. He is a leader of his own family team. He knows how to bounce back from adversity and measure his and his co-stars' steps. Great wealth of scenarios. With vivid narratives.
Awesome! How lively, development. Delegating. Freeing. Slipping away.
The real environment is lived, as if it places the reader on the stage waiting to find the protagonist and keep him company. I'll have a drink and I'll go, then dance!
And the empire of the Raven?
This ball as mentioned before, commemorated the Foundation of the Empire of Raven. It has been five decades since the empire united the kingdoms in the Continent of Hasha. And this was their second ball in the spring of the year. No matter what I looked at, nobles and royalties from other allied kingdoms, it was just the same thing to me.
Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
Beautiful description. Master writing. Kudos to Kingdom Media editors. (like there is a medieval - contemporary mix)
"Of course, pink hair and eyes like spring blossoms could only belong to one household within the empire, Lady Melissa," Then I faced the other girl. "And glossy green hair and eyes like emeralds like yours, Lady Eunice; anybody would be able to recognize who you are, with both the ladies great qualities. Not only that, plenty of news about the ladies talents is always on the newspapers."
Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
What an interesting opportunity to discover the world at a party. Having passed a slip of life.
'Ah, she must be anxious with all this attention. This is her first ball and public appearance after recovering from her disease.'
Fantasy · Aeipathy_02
I like the introduction ending with individual reference, AND those full names. The prelude to the dialogue between sisters: with diplomatic purposes. Whose duty to attend events. And the right to choose a husband.
It has poetic features. and philosophical. for a previous existence and for a life of natural coexistence
Beyond every tiny things
Sci-fi · Wine_ImmortalGod