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What is there to explain something over which is already understood the mc I'd not a candle near fang yuan he cares about his dead weight family which will get useless during immortal realm and introduced garbage romance with some oc transmigrator who is weak dead weight and now u will keep coping and making mc more soft and lower side character iq do mc has plot armor and make it seem like heavens will absolute dog crap novel compared to its beginning.

Was going well but author added romance so expect him to share benefits and sacrifice his life for some dead weight OC

most 5 star rates are botted accounts this novel is a dumpster fire of an excuse of a novel

100K is Close

Just checked it out, it's beautiful.

What is it with these books filled with unnecessary comedy every page is filled with cringy jokes which give the reader second hand embarrassment and the Grammer is horrible so many mistakes this needs to be fixed before author even releases the next chapter.

Its your first novel. I know you will get better on your next novel keep grinding

Mc is an individual dependent on the system for everything. His mindset is flawed he gives benefits to his friends just for the sake of being his friend. The only reason he is still alive right now is because of the plot armor otherwise in reality I would see a character like this perishing under 50 chapters. Garbage novel nothing you can't find here just a replica of other anti hero system novels.

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Congrats on 100K I see you reach a million easily if your bound completing the novel

that's a good decision comedy should be forbidden in dark novels ruins the entire atmosphere the more depressing the environment the better

Author I see a lot of undertone out of place comedy does it get fixed in later chapters or remains the same currently at chapter 15

I was not as fortunate

Your work stands out when compared to other dark novels so I just HAD to comment and let you know