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I like it. The chess piece theme from Monarch's Indifference is there. He's handsome but not too handsome. And he actually looks like how he's described. It doesn't feel like a copied cover image.

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He pretty much goes through the exact same character arc as Ryu Baeksan in The Boxer. Even down to when he cries in a hospital bed for the first time as a teenager after losing to a much stronger emotionless person. BTW, read The Boxer. It's REALLY good!

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Ren:

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So will Ren save Jin? And if he does, will it lead to Jin's ego being further injured, leading him towards becoming a villain?

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I honestly like thag he has to struggle to adapt to the concept of killing. Most characters that become used to killing do so a little to quickly or easily. Sometimes they'll just suppress their emotions until they don't feel it anymore. Maybe they'll just think "You gotta do what you gotta do" and get over it like that. Maybe the one they kill is so evil they feel justified in killing them. Or they'll just kill and think "Huh, I surprisingly don't feel anything when killing despite having never done it before. Is something wrong with me?"

Ren:

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I like that Kevin isn't so completely good that he would never kill.

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Do you do what's easy and convenient or do you do what's right? And why are you making that decision? Because you're a good person? Because you want to be a good person?

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