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I've read the novel ،so wiki won't be very useful.

I know it's stupid to compare characters with different power systems and from different worlds, but for God's sake, how can Mihawk face the genjutsu? , and what can he do against Susano, and that's just Madra without Hashirama cells and without Renigan.

Question for the author Do you imagine yourself in the place of the main character? Is this the reason for your exaggeration in describing how wonderful the main character is? Because if this is the case, then I am sorry to tell you that you started this work from a very wrong foundation.... You should know that a good writer deals with the world of the novel as a chessboard and God moves the pieces in a way that serves the general story and never obeys himself in the place of a character he created or even sympathizes with it because if he does and unconsciously he will start ignoring the story and make the world revolve around that character and before he realizes that the plot will be disintegrated and things will get out of control end If you try to put things back in their place, you will have created a large number of gaps and paradoxes (English is not my first language )

Can you stop mentioning how strong your enemies are and instead tell us something useful like MC age? , what year it is?,.....

The complaint is not from copying movies or claiming that it is his creation, but I don't like how he brags about that when he talks to himself Meaning when the talk is directed to us

Why do you sacrifice anything in the first place, you already have a system

Do you have any idea how the novels work!? where is the description and the character's structure? where are the conversations? where is the pov of the rest of the characters?

Seriously, I don't remember. And since I am not a picky person there must be a really good reason for writing this comment

I take back my word My grandmother who is in her nineties and suffers from Alzheimer's and dementia, is smarter than the MC

Will Mc ever stop blaming Zetsu for everything bad that happens?

Anyone in Veceres' place will do the same thing, it's the only option available, Either saving the baby and losing the mother or losing the baby. and the mother .

For a Chinese novel, it seems that this MC has some brain cells.

Unexpectedly, this was very good

I don't know why you had to be creative about reincarnation, You already have a great scenario that works successfully, you die, you find yourself in a new world, the system wakes up and here you are.

It is true that Emma is a merciful and passionate queen but also smart and she will not suggest to the king anything that might anger the lords of Westeros and the followers of the seven fanatics, especially since everyone still remembers what happened with the Major the cruel

Danzo must get away with it ، It's too early for him to die, and without him Orchimaru wouldn't be Orchimaru, Aktsuki wouldn't come into being, Sakumo would live, and Hokage might become. In short, if Danzo dies, MC future information becomes useless. Although some may think that he doesn't need that information with his power, let me remind you that Hashirama, Yagami Uchiha, and Patriarch Azumaki were stronger than him, and yet they died young ، So I think in order to keep the novel realistic, Mc must move from direct bloody fighting to political and information fighting. (English is not my first language )

Why in heaven's name kill him, isn't it better to arrest him and use him as a hostage or a bargaining chip in negotiations or even get the Peugeot monster from him and increase his power؟؟