Hmm, i see. Well, Culti genre has become a staple that is a cliche of harems, faceslap and identical power scaling. With so many common elements, it's hard to make yourself visible among the clutter. One thing i know for sure, people enjoy well fleshed out female leads, with relatively fast progression, and genius MC who is ruthless to enemies but warm to his babes. Plot armor should be unnoticeable, so care with progression is needed. Also, separation cliches are generally avoided. There's a really fine line in the genre that makes a novel good or trash.. lately, there isn't a middle ground for these. World building is also really important, an area i noticed you lacking. Focus on describing the world more, give it a larger dimension. Yang Wei's world seems like a patch of land for example, barely explored due to his level and growth. Also, avoid making all women do incredibly beautiful in a harem work, cause people will want them in harem. Focus on few remarkable ones with potential instead of making it a world of hotness for MC.
ch 14 Pill Transmutation and Immortal Beauty.
Eastern · CastlePanda
Hmm.. Honestly, you can improve this novel's pace easily. One random day, MC searches through trash, and sees a lustre in cow dung. He finds the pill, which surprisingly, is a supreme treasure that opens all his spiritual seas and refines his physique to the limit, eliminating all impurities. In this small world, they have no ways of cleaning the impurities in clogged seas, so they mistake the numbers for talent, which is flawed and arhaic. Thus, MC starts his ascension finally. I am sure he's been working on a technique for himself in the dark, and this should jumpstart the story. You control the pace, not others, so don't boggle yourself down with preestablished ideas. The foundation for the novel is good, and MC is decent, so you can build it however you want. Treat this as prologue until MC gets his chance and then grows up, then you can start dual culti (he should know the principle) and incorporate other ideas. My point is, don't lose yourself in a cycle of unfinished works, and develop one properly.
ch 14 Pill Transmutation and Immortal Beauty.
Eastern · CastlePanda
Hmm... I wonder if Strax is expecting his family to be targetted. He should be aware that this information can't be concealed.
ch 77 Overloading yourself with training.
Fantasy · Katanexy
So we found the Mistress of the Maze. I am quite sure this it. She gives off the same filthy nature.
'Did I hear that right?' The queen's thoughts flooded into Raven's mind again. Her eyes shifting to the king, darted at him a gaze sharp enough to tear through his shriveling flesh. Leaning back into his throne in response, the king nervously gulped before going completely hush. 'That's what I thought, you pathetic dog. Stay obedient like that or the next time we're alone, who knows maybe I'll suck what little life's left inside you.'
Fantasy · Writersblockills
What a disgusting woman.. I really hope thos one's not gonna be a target. I feel like puking just reading about her tbh..
Her hands slipped down to the boys's cute balls, she squeezed them tight making them flinch. Flopping on her breasts with a yelp, the two broke into tears while also gushing out cum on the mistress's belly.
Fantasy · Writersblockills
He needs to bang spmething.. By this point, romance can't even be mentioned..
ch 153 CHAPTER 153 – Code Red!
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
It's fine. as long as the time where MC is nerfed will pass. I don't like nerfed MC's. Some holding back here and there is fine, but being weakened and vulnerable is a no go, especially when dangerous events are on the way.
ch 149 CHAPTER 149 – Home-Sweet-Home.
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
MC is kinda pathetic... Has no composure despite being a hero. This is only understandable from a normal person's point of view, not from a warrior's. So, in fact, it just makes him look pathetic instead of natural.
ch 0 7 A Dream Unveiling Forgotten Memories
Fantasy · ManipulatorsOne
Well, the others must have been some pathetic weaklings.. since all this woman does is conjure crystals..
He had to acknowledge that this Demon Emperor was exceptionally formidable, surpassing the level of the Demon Generals he had encountered before.
Fantasy · ManipulatorsOne
I mean.. Does she know any other attack other than crystals? Small ones, multiple ones, gigantic ones.. You're really not that creative when it comes to these things huh?..
"F***!" Leon exclaimed inwardly in fear as he observed, above the sky, a hundred-meter-long, sharp red crystal with its pointed tip already aimed at him!
Fantasy · ManipulatorsOne
Well, this was a nice change of pace. Glad to see Arthur is showing some growth, since killing everything is too evil and shortsighted. He should first asess the situation and act accordingly, as enemies should be identified first and investigated before acting. This is best done at this moment, when dealing with weak people, so it doesn't become a habit when dealing with strong families of other regions. After all, Lakeview is just a small town, and the world has plenty of people in Aria's Realm, along with others stronger than her. Right now, Arthur needs to develop in silence more than anything, without making waves he can't handle on his own. Who knows when Aria will be unable to help him... it only takes a moment's distraction for a truly strong enemy to eliminate Arthur and his girls at this point.
ch 129 Afternoon
Fantasy · LamenThief
I pity them.. I doubt they have any 5 star ranks... No matter how strong they are, they should reach at most 4 star or close to it. A war will get these poor souls slaughtered, so hopefully, they get assimilated.
ch 933 Leaders of the Wanderlust Travelling Tortoise Runaway City (2)
Village Head's Debauchery
Fantasy · Royalpanda