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Plafu
male LV 11Have fun reading
2021-04-03 đã tham gia GermanyHuy hiệu 16
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o thank you
ch 12 Chapter 12: The Training (1)
Spear Master
Urban · Plafu
A Oki thank you for that Tipp I will try it thank you 🙏
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: The pet Shop
Spear Master
Urban · Plafu
Thank you and yea I know it needs work and I try my best and with the conversation that’s one of my weekneses sadly but thank you for your feedback
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: The pet Shop
Spear Master
Urban · Plafu
o yea I'm Stupid thank you for showing it me
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Spear Master
Urban · Plafu
sadly i don't have enough time for 3 k chapters mostly 1.5 to 2k i can make everytow
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Spear Master
Urban · Plafu
i use gramerly
Immediately as Yi Jing sees that he Jumps up into the air and pulls out his spear from his back and throws spear with his full power towards the worm, as the spear hits the worm he goes true him, and for the first second after he came out of the other side nothing happens.
Spear Master
Urban · Plafu
i want to have that picture of your cover
ch 0 5 Actually Ability is not tasteless
Marvel Naruto System
Anime & Comics · Fire_Cultivation
i alrady use it but still thx f or the tip
Thank you and I work on the grammar and I try to improve it with every chapter
its a really good Story
ch 11 First Group of Fans
Game Designer: Starts as Her Only Employee
Games · polarfox369
or in short terms i want them to have a better quality
Spear Master
Urban · Plafu