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stop using incorrect adjectives please, it's taking out any form of immersion from the story
The blood spilt only amplified the pirates nearby. However, the bombastic atmosphere within the den of the greed of scum soon halted.
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
I don't feel safe with what this statement implies.
[Haki is found in all living things, this is true in every single world. Even in your previous life.]
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
"... It's Senjumaru Shutara, Hiroyuki sama." The girl said with a courteous bow and a pretty calm tone
Jujutsu Kaisen: The Traveller
Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz
Smartasses below, beware.
"I am a big fan. I love to watch it." Jason specified. "But it would be an absolute nightmare to live in. That universe is filled to the brim with villains that can take out planets as if they were nothing more than ants."
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
I don't think special-grades really need to take an exam; they just get classified as that simply because they're special.
Technically, I'm already considered a grade-one sorcerer, but that will change soon. I need to apply to become a special grade. I'm unsure how that works since special grades are anomalies in the Jujutsu world.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
Add Stussy, kindly please.
# ROMANCE / HAREM — Not the main focus but it will be present. The harem will be small and will not be Pokemon-style. Expect it to be built up over arcs and reasonable.
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Ayo what??
"Very well, now I will send you back and when you arrive say the following, I allow you in," I said causing Issei to nod.
He, The One
Anime & Comics · outsidr
Scary.
"God damn old fucking shitcan piece of ass hair cunt fist dickhole bitch!" I continued shouting until a few moments passed and I fell completely silent. There was no use throwing a fit now.
He, The One
Anime & Comics · outsidr
I apologize for having standards, madam. Can't handle a little complaining that isn't about you, now? Can you?
"My powers haven't returned yet, and my connection to my treasure continues to strengthen. It would be foolish to waste the glory of being a prince of a kingdom that could be mine if it's splendid enough." Gilgamesh's words were arrogant, a result of his unique personality acquired through his previous experiences.
Defying Divinity
Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
Do you even know the phrase 'Show, not tell', you absolutely ignorant buffoon? Details can be "shown" by writing a scenario where Gilgamesh is acting like how he is acting, not being "told". Telling instead of showing implies lazy writing and lack of creativity in creating interesting scenarios for a novel.
"My powers haven't returned yet, and my connection to my treasure continues to strengthen. It would be foolish to waste the glory of being a prince of a kingdom that could be mine if it's splendid enough." Gilgamesh's words were arrogant, a result of his unique personality acquired through his previous experiences.
Defying Divinity
Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
The hype!!!
Jesus christ, reduce the telling and do more showing. It's like I'm being told that this guy acts arrogant because he is... arrogant. It's like stating the obvious.
"My powers haven't returned yet, and my connection to my treasure continues to strengthen. It would be foolish to waste the glory of being a prince of a kingdom that could be mine if it's splendid enough." Gilgamesh's words were arrogant, a result of his unique personality acquired through his previous experiences.
Defying Divinity
Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
The font's weird
ch 0 1 Just Like That, I Am No Longer Human
Uninvited, A Vampire Becomes Part of My Youth
Anime & Comics · Frona_Gorgophone
Welcome back, mate!
First of all, I want to express my sincerest and deepest apology for the hearts and minds I have disappointed because of my disappearance. I truly wanted to write, but life got its clutch on me. I am now given some space to breathe and here I am. Those who are quite familiar with my name may ask, why do you write a new fanfic instead of finishing the new one? The reason is that I dreamed about this fic one day and I can't get it out of my head to this day. Most of all, of course, I also want to earn some bread from my story. Yes, you will be able to find the advanced chapters of this work on Patreon.
Uninvited, A Vampire Becomes Part of My Youth
Anime & Comics · Frona_Gorgophone
How many times have I read this kind of paragraph from ching the chong novels?
Riser might be a bastard, scumbag, or even a playboy, but he was handsome. His family status was also awesome. It wouldn't be wrong to say that his family was the richest in the Underworld, as his family could produce Phenex Tears, a special potion of liquid that can instantly heal injuries.
Riser Phenex isn't a villain
Anime & Comics · akikan40
same bruh, same. i feel like i'm getting dementia at age 16
AN: Stop spoiling the new coomers on what will happen in the future. If someone asked to be spoiled, let them be in the dark. Just like how you were back then.
Overlord: The Origin
Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz
UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH
"Hmm, actually, I think I know just the person to help you." he turned back and looked at Irene. "She was once the Queen of a kingdom where Dragons and Humans lived peacefully. In my opinion, she could help you the most if you are looking for advice."
Isekai Restaurant
Anime & Comics · CrossEdge
They're from Honkai Impact 3rd. Basically, Otto Apocalypse has feelings for the Saint (Kallen Kaslana) and wants to help her with her desire to protect the people, but Kallen was betrayed and killed by a Honkai Creature (The enemies of the franchise), and Otto could do nothing but watch it.
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An utterly unnecessary rewrite. The author took a one year hiatus in order to organize everything and rewrite. The previous one was already pretty good, the author could've just gradually improved their writing and the quality of the story by releasing chapters regularly. However, they said they wanted some time to rewrite everything because they wanted the whole book to be consistent in its quality. The result? This ridiculous... thing? Honestly, I'm incredibly disappointed since this was one of my favorite fanfics and the previous one certainly managed to tug at my emotional strings, but this one isn't doing it at all. The incorrect use of adjectives and certain verbs isn't helping with the immersion, the characters that were properly fleshed out in the previous writing weren't even fleshed out properly (e.g. Whitebeard vs Borealis), the world-building is worse compared to the previous one, and the story development and pacing is all over the place, it feels like you don't know what they'll do next (not in a good way) and since everthing just happens all of a sudden without a proper build up or suspense, the story ends up feeling lackluster compared to the previous one, a shadow of its former self. To conclude, this is a rewrite that turned out for the worse. WAY WORSE. If you expect this'll be as good as the previous one, just read something else and save your time.
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_