Ashish_Kumar_1835

Ashish_Kumar_1835

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2021-05-19 đã tham gia Global
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Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
1 months ago
Posted

The repetitive sub plots as well too many side characters popping up regularly makes the story cumbersome

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
1 months ago
Posted

mashing 2 universes and still not able to properly utilise elements of them both.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
1 months ago
Posted

This feels more like a summary in the guise of a fic.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
1 months ago
Posted

The hapzard way of writing the story is the downfall of this fic.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
1 months ago
Posted

An intriguing story. The genre troupe is followed by the latter. Still have to leave after a long journey as the plot has become repetitive.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
2 months ago
Posted

Nothing unique in terms of story. the premise at first looked promising but after some time the story started following an overpowered mc plot.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
2 months ago
Posted

At one time this story was good but now it has lost its pacing as well it's plot. Now it's just looks likes a amalgamation of different plotlines.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
4 months ago
Posted

The story started out good but the speed at which it petered out is all too common.

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835
5 months ago
Commented

2 Follow the plotline closely, if you decide to do this then you will start incorporating irregularities in the story which will lead to plot holes ultimately ending the story midway .