Been really enjoying the novel. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]
appreciate the input, yeah was thinking of touching on the academy period with flashbacks now and then, also planned on having some supporting nobility down the road. Probably touch on it a bit in volume three, finished writing volume two yesterday just have to go back and edit the drafts.
I was hoping people would like the accents <3
"What if I be tellin ya when ye go ta sleep tonight ye could wake up wit a whole new life" the old man said in all seriousness, before the young man's eyes the old fellow shifted, his back straightened his hair blackened and the bright glow from his eyes became more intense.
Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
thanks I must have missed that in editing :D
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Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
Very well written, found a few typing errors here and there but they didn't take away from the story at all. suggest going back and finding them whenever you have free time. First book i've read on here that made me feel emotion for the characters being written about. Can't wait to see what happens with Lucan and hope to see Iris in the future. :D
Really enjoyed reading this will have to come back when you have more chapters available :D
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theres a couple spots here where the word conscience is used, i think the word you meant to use was consciousness. could be wrong though
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Fantasy · theforce1579
right in the feels :D
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Fantasy · theforce1579
Really feel bad for Iris, she was a good person but her situation destroyed her.
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Fantasy · theforce1579
Can't wait to read more, hope you're enjoying the holiday season!
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