Been really enjoying the novel. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]
appreciate the input, yeah was thinking of touching on the academy period with flashbacks now and then, also planned on having some supporting nobility down the road. Probably touch on it a bit in volume three, finished writing volume two yesterday just have to go back and edit the drafts.
I was hoping people would like the accents <3
"What if I be tellin ya when ye go ta sleep tonight ye could wake up wit a whole new life" the old man said in all seriousness, before the young man's eyes the old fellow shifted, his back straightened his hair blackened and the bright glow from his eyes became more intense.
Chronicles of a Holy Knight
Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
thanks I must have missed that in editing :D
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Chronicles of a Holy Knight
Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
Very well written, found a few typing errors here and there but they didn't take away from the story at all. suggest going back and finding them whenever you have free time. First book i've read on here that made me feel emotion for the characters being written about. Can't wait to see what happens with Lucan and hope to see Iris in the future. :D
Really enjoyed reading this will have to come back when you have more chapters available :D
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theres a couple spots here where the word conscience is used, i think the word you meant to use was consciousness. could be wrong though
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right in the feels :D
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Really feel bad for Iris, she was a good person but her situation destroyed her.
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original Chronicles of a Holy Knight
We follow the story of our reincarnated and transmigrated hero Dayn Kanara as he grows up in the mystical world of Thallia. A world that had been abandoned by the gods following the heretical Dragon Wars some hundred years in the past finds new hope when the divines return following the awakening brought on by The Dragon God's chosen champion. However with new light comes new darkness....37 Chs 28 sưu tầm
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Corporation Earth: Genetech Academy
Darren Katagiri starts at Genetech Academy where he has scored the highest marks in the physical section of the military training school. He meets others with similar extraordinary abilities, some become good friends others bitter enemies. Darren struggles with memory issues as he continues to develop his reputation for being the best at what he does. What dark secret could be behind his memory loss and who is the strange person who keeps calling him at night.......24 Chs 20 sưu tầm
Can't wait to read more, hope you're enjoying the holiday season!
The Abandoned Husband Dominates
Urban · I Have Something To Say