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Anime & Comics · BingeFics
The constant use of "author notes" really takes me out of the story. How about use less next time?
Fantasy · kuhaku_sora
Good start on the story, you should try and focus on fleshing out the world and story abit more.
Movies · Sea_of_Blood
Thanks for saving my time! x14
Book&Literature · Mike_Lu
Good until chapter 10 then it went downhill. Truely wasted potential. The memory loss is implemeted in a very bad way and ruins the whole story as a whole. Feeling sad now.
Movies · Uchiha_Lover21
As soon as you tell that your from another world it just ruins the story. Its a immediate turn off. It just ruins the story. Good start otherwise but im gonna stop here.
Anime & Comics · ASHARA
Ah okay. Its ok but but tone it down abit as it ruins the story.
Book&Literature · DaoOfGay
Starts off good but about a quarter way through it just begins to get really gay and sexual. The story is ok but the gay sexual dialogue makes me cringe.
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