ZxeroX

I haven’t read much, but with what I've already read. It seems like this was written by a kid or the translation really suck. Some of the plot doesn’t even make sense. Like in the beginning of the novel for the archery scene. Geez. I’m not going to spoil the novel for anyone. So good luck

It’s an good novel to read and had some orignal idea .however the nationalism is over the top. So I stop reading it . If you can ignore it how much they say Great xia and how amazing it is , it’s solid novel with decent grammar .

Amazing story. It’s one of the best novels on the platform right now. Keep up the good work, author. I have nothing really to complain about the story, besides it being a bit slow-paced, and the fighting is beginning to feel redundant. However, that’s the theme of this novel: to fight on the battlefield. Also, there are a few translation or spelling mistakes.

I have to say it's one of the better Harry Potter fanfics out there. the first few chapters really got the story going. But there's a few things I dislike about the novel. It's just my personal opinion. First you could have gone with a better partner for MC. I just don’t find her attractive. But that just me😂🤷‍♂️. Second I feel you basically skip or don’t use his cheat power at all . When I say don’t use it I mean by actually casting them or showing it . He may have learn the spell but that’s it .it seem pointless to have the cheat if he not going to use it . Beside my criticism, I do find the book enjoyable to read. You bought depth into most characters you wrote . You grammar was excellent. Keep up good work.

I read until chapter 40. It’s a low key brain rot novel. There to many grammar mistakes and the translation is medicore. However it's still readable and enjoyable if you ignore all of that. But it wasn't worth unlocking any new chapters to continue pass chp40.